Comment from LJbutterfly

Excellent

I really enjoyed this delightful and creative snow flake story with a masterful play on words. My favorite innovative words were "busin-ice ice-sence."

Even though you have entered a blind contest, I just finished reading Helen's interview with you and decided to check out your profile. You have had a very interesting and inspiring writing career. I will be looking for more of your work. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023

Thank you very much for your kind review.

Comment from Anne Johnston

Excellent

Wow, this took a lot of thought. I love how you have used the word "ice" so many times in place of other letters. What an original entry for the contest. Hope you do well.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023

Thank you so much for your comments and five stars. It is appreciated!

reply by Anne Johnston on 02-Feb-2023

You are welcome

Comment from Jim Wile

Excellent

N-ice job. Very clever how you got all those ice and winter terms in there. I especially liked "if you carrot all". This was a very creative approach to the "too many flakes" contest. Should be a contender.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023

Thank you so much for your n-ice review.

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This was clever as as well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
I liked the blending of new words with Winter Words.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry
Doctor Ricky

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023

Thanks for your five stars! Have a n-ice day.

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

Must agree with this cute post about the weather. For sure we are experiencing the same here, all snowed in and with nowhere to go. Please, let our electricity stay on.

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 Comment Written 01-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023

Thank you for stopping by with your kind comments.

Comment from Terry Broxson

Excellent

LOL, very clever indeed. It takes a little bit of discipline to read this and get all the clever wording. I am thinking it took a great deal of discipline to write as well. This is an excellent entry for this contest and very creative work. Terry.

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 Comment Written 01-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023

Thank you for your review. Your compliments are much appreciated.