Winter wanes
7 words or less poem18 total reviews
Comment from Nicki Nance
This is a solid entry for a challenging contest. I like your choice of subject matter and the graphic is so perfect it adds a dimension to the words. The meaning of the words is sweet, but even more I liked the distribution of words per line. You put the seven words to a rhythm of sorts.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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This is a solid entry for a challenging contest. I like your choice of subject matter and the graphic is so perfect it adds a dimension to the words. The meaning of the words is sweet, but even more I liked the distribution of words per line. You put the seven words to a rhythm of sorts.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Superb review zanya
Comment from jacquelyn popp
I enjoyed your poem. The photo with the butterfly was a nice touch. I liked how you described the sun light. Good job. Well done. Thank you for sharing. One question if you could help me with, how do you get the words to show up on the photo. I find that quite interesting.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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I enjoyed your poem. The photo with the butterfly was a nice touch. I liked how you described the sun light. Good job. Well done. Thank you for sharing. One question if you could help me with, how do you get the words to show up on the photo. I find that quite interesting.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Great review -actually I don't know how to get the words to show up on the photo but I do want to find out- must google it. zanya
Comment from Mintybee
This poem fits the criteria for having seven words. It is a vivid image with strong diction. The line break works well, separating season from butterfly, making a nice contrast. Best wishes in your contest!
Mintybee
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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This poem fits the criteria for having seven words. It is a vivid image with strong diction. The line break works well, separating season from butterfly, making a nice contrast. Best wishes in your contest!
Mintybee
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Great reveiw zanya
Comment from royowen
A great use of these seven words, somehow these living metaphors stir the soul, and give hope to the heart. The burrefly is the substance of great poetry, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
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A great use of these seven words, somehow these living metaphors stir the soul, and give hope to the heart. The burrefly is the substance of great poetry, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Great reveiw zanya
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Bless you
Comment from jessizero
Happy beginning of February! I liked your poem. The butterfly was an excellent greeting to this month and to spring. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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Happy beginning of February! I liked your poem. The butterfly was an excellent greeting to this month and to spring. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
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Great reveiw zanya
Comment from Sugarray77
I loved the lilac border you chose.. I always think of February in shades of light purple... the hue that reminds me of blooming crocus. Your verse is perfect for this prompt. Good luck.
Melissa
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I loved the lilac border you chose.. I always think of February in shades of light purple... the hue that reminds me of blooming crocus. Your verse is perfect for this prompt. Good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Great reveiw - is there anything more beautiful than the blooming crocus? zanya
Comment from Frank Malley
Nice picture of a Buckeye Butterfly, a true beauty. Unfortunately the butterfly isn't flitting, it's sitting on a windowsill, waiting for deliverance by
better weather or an open window. On FanStory, writers love these word count and syllable poems. To me, these designs more often cripple than encourage. It's very hard to build the Taj Mahal out of a shoe box.
The conjunction of two images in this poem, the pale day and the butterfly, are full of potentials that remain unreleased by seven words.
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Nice picture of a Buckeye Butterfly, a true beauty. Unfortunately the butterfly isn't flitting, it's sitting on a windowsill, waiting for deliverance by
better weather or an open window. On FanStory, writers love these word count and syllable poems. To me, these designs more often cripple than encourage. It's very hard to build the Taj Mahal out of a shoe box.
The conjunction of two images in this poem, the pale day and the butterfly, are full of potentials that remain unreleased by seven words.
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Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
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A very interesting review - thanks for taking time to share your observations zanya
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent poem for the contest
with the maximum seven word.
Where I live, there are no butterflies in February,
but other areas are much warmer.
Nicely done.
Best wishes.
Robert
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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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This is an excellent poem for the contest
with the maximum seven word.
Where I live, there are no butterflies in February,
but other areas are much warmer.
Nicely done.
Best wishes.
Robert
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Great reveiw zanya