One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
You plumb effectively the depths of sorrow here upon your discussion of passing away. I particularly liked the words:
He moved with ease
while I stood with mouth agape.
He is so clearly going to win the fight, kay
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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2023
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You plumb effectively the depths of sorrow here upon your discussion of passing away. I particularly liked the words:
He moved with ease
while I stood with mouth agape.
He is so clearly going to win the fight, kay
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Comment Written 16-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy