Random Rhyme and Petty Prose
Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "Widow"a collection of phenomenally mundane work.
16 total reviews
Comment from Mary Vigasin
A fun read. I have known ladies like your Widow Maycurr. Now that I write her name, I get the joke!
This is my last review for the day, and I am glad it is one that I leave with a smile.
Best regards,
Mary
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2023
A fun read. I have known ladies like your Widow Maycurr. Now that I write her name, I get the joke!
This is my last review for the day, and I am glad it is one that I leave with a smile.
Best regards,
Mary
Comment Written 14-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2023
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Thank you, Mary.
Comment from kahpot
There are some people you must learn to ignore or just give up will we find out if Sam be a priest or knocking on death's door, very intriguing and very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2023
There are some people you must learn to ignore or just give up will we find out if Sam be a priest or knocking on death's door, very intriguing and very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 14-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2023
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Thank you, kahpot.
Comment from lyenochka
That's funny. I guess this reminds me of the parable that Jesus told about that stubborn widow who bothered that judge every single day until she got justice. Fun story.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2023
That's funny. I guess this reminds me of the parable that Jesus told about that stubborn widow who bothered that judge every single day until she got justice. Fun story.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2023
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Thanks, Helen.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute and well written 150 word story you have penned for the contest. You use very good descriptive words even with the required word count. Great imagery with the picture of the green door. Please check out this one thing:
standing, opened. I woman leaned........ Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
This is a very cute and well written 150 word story you have penned for the contest. You use very good descriptive words even with the required word count. Great imagery with the picture of the green door. Please check out this one thing:
standing, opened. I woman leaned........ Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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Comment Written 14-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
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Thanks, Teri.
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You are so welcome!!!
Comment from JT traveller
Lovely prose. A rollicking tale of which I would like to read more. Well composed and the writing flows well. Congratulations on a job well done. Thankyou
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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
Lovely prose. A rollicking tale of which I would like to read more. Well composed and the writing flows well. Congratulations on a job well done. Thankyou
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Comment Written 14-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
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Thanks, Jacqueline
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Thank you.
Comment from Earl Corp
Is the widow Maycurr somebody we should know or is it just the name you used for the story? I had to to laugh about the Green Door reference. Very nice job.
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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
Is the widow Maycurr somebody we should know or is it just the name you used for the story? I had to to laugh about the Green Door reference. Very nice job.
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Comment Written 14-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
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Widow Maker. Get it?