Comment from JT traveller

Excellent

Great selection of photographs to accompany the poem. Excellent choice of font and colour as they draw the reader in. Most people love the sight of a magnificent dawn.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

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Comment from AP Apgar

Excellent

I like your six word poem - very colorful - excellent picture presentation - I like the clarity of this picture - very nice. Good word count!! Lol. - I agree, the dawn in the picture setting is soothing to the soul and uplifting to the spirit- would be great to be up in the mountains by the campfire putting on some coffee - watching this sunrise coming up. Good Job.
AP

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 Comment Written 13-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

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Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

I especially liked two things about this poem. Firstly, the way you emphasized the colours of your illustration in the text of the poem. Secondly the last word. 'uplifting' yes the dawn causes our spirits to rise as the day rises up. Very clever. kay

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 Comment Written 13-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

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