Novella - Unwanted Dog
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Comment from country ranch writer
WellI am hoping Bret is going to be with the man who bought him a hit meal before he fled the Mc Donald's.he didn't have a clue what to do, keep on the street or return to Heritage Hill to be abused some more.
1/5/2023--5:43 pm Thursday
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2023
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WellI am hoping Bret is going to be with the man who bought him a hit meal before he fled the Mc Donald's.he didn't have a clue what to do, keep on the street or return to Heritage Hill to be abused some more.
1/5/2023--5:43 pm Thursday
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2023
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
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Smiles
Comment from BethShelby
Wow! This man was enchanted by you as much as you were enchanted by him. What a great story your life is turning out to be. I wonder if you're writing it the same way you did the first time or if you've made some changes. I also wonder where you got the idea of who you beleve you father was and how if the woman who dropped you off without an explaination was the mother who had cancer.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2023
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Wow! This man was enchanted by you as much as you were enchanted by him. What a great story your life is turning out to be. I wonder if you're writing it the same way you did the first time or if you've made some changes. I also wonder where you got the idea of who you beleve you father was and how if the woman who dropped you off without an explaination was the mother who had cancer.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2023
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Appreciate your insightful comments and the review.
Comment from Sankey
This is getting very exciting and a great read. leaving a lot of "of's" out with the "couples" along the way. I know it is an American thing but the "of's" in there would make it read better, internationally, stuff USA.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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This is getting very exciting and a great read. leaving a lot of "of's" out with the "couples" along the way. I know it is an American thing but the "of's" in there would make it read better, internationally, stuff USA.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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Will watch that "of" stuff. Always appreciate your comments and the review.
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Its a bit like the "loss", "lose" and "loose" and the "choose" and chose" that too many Americans get lost on.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
So Dusty must have some money to be able call up a person to do a background check. I am liking Dusty more all the time. Thank you for sharing.
Dusty shook his head "no". (Dusty shook his head. "No.")
My splintered bleeding heart pined for Dusty to call me back and dress the wounds life cacooned me in. (cocooned)
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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So Dusty must have some money to be able call up a person to do a background check. I am liking Dusty more all the time. Thank you for sharing.
Dusty shook his head "no". (Dusty shook his head. "No.")
My splintered bleeding heart pined for Dusty to call me back and dress the wounds life cacooned me in. (cocooned)
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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Appreciate the catches, your comments, and the review.
Comment from royowen
The first sense of belonging must have hit you at that time, if you'd survived the streets you could have been anything couldn't you? Someone utterly without feeling, someone with an emotional nothing, who could kill at the drop of a hat. Beautifully written Brett, you led an unbelievable life. Well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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The first sense of belonging must have hit you at that time, if you'd survived the streets you could have been anything couldn't you? Someone utterly without feeling, someone with an emotional nothing, who could kill at the drop of a hat. Beautifully written Brett, you led an unbelievable life. Well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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It did for that reason, among others.
Much appreciate your insightful comments and the review.
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Most welcome
