Comment from kahpot

Excellent

I have broken many horses in my time, and it is as it sounds "broken" to see and or try to tame that spirit somehow is wrong, yet for man somehow necessary, we applaud rodeos, we put a flank strap on the horse to reignite its broken spirit, your beautiful poem tells of how the horse really feels****kahpot

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent five stars review! Happy and prosperous 2023.

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Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

A lovely and perfect Tanka, Gypsy. I liked the energy in this verse as exemplified by the words... wild, furious, gallop, refusing. Well done on all points with this rustic themed piece.

Melissa

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

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Comment from AP Apgar

Excellent

Excellent modern Tanka- excellent flow- nice and smooth - painting a clear picture- wild horse unwilling to give up the nature of the beast within- for a life of servitude- very accurate- good Job AP

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 Comment Written 03-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. Have a great day or night.

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Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I think it's "break of dawn," not "brake of dawn."
Other than that, your poem was lovely. Thank you so much for sharing your poem here, and best wishes to you.

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 Comment Written 03-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023

Thank you for catching that error. Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. Have a great day or night.

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