Lessons Learned and Spiritual
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "Self Inspection "Do good and feel good poems
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Comment from Terry Broxson
LOL, well, of course, I am out of the proverbial sixes! This is such a well-written poem that those who should pay attention won't get it, and those who get it, already have it. An exceptional job! Terry.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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LOL, well, of course, I am out of the proverbial sixes! This is such a well-written poem that those who should pay attention won't get it, and those who get it, already have it. An exceptional job! Terry.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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Thanks Terry, Im so happy you like this one! Thanks for you kind review and comments my dear friend! That's so Terry kind of You!
Comment from Janet Foor
Lots of soul searching and "soul inspection" in you satire poem Debi.
Great artwork and presentation to add to the message.
Well done my friend.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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Lots of soul searching and "soul inspection" in you satire poem Debi.
Great artwork and presentation to add to the message.
Well done my friend.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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Janet, I thank you for your very sweet review and comments for my poem.
I appreciate it so much, my dear friend!
Comment from Raul1
It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like your poem. Nice. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like your poem. Nice. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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Thanks Raul, for always being so kind, sweet and you!. and also for your kind comments.
Comment from Teri7
Debi, Another very well written poem and much needed in this day and age. You used great descriptive words and perfect imagery. Thanks for sharing! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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Debi, Another very well written poem and much needed in this day and age. You used great descriptive words and perfect imagery. Thanks for sharing! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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Hi Teri Thank you for your very sweet review and comments!. I just felt the need to try to get
I appreciate it so much my dear friend!
That's so Teri kind of you! (wink)
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You are a very good writer my friend. Maybe one day I will be able to compose like you and a lot on here do! love you! Teri
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You are too modest Sweet Teri
Comment from susand3022
Well, Debi, sometimes one must be humiliated in order to reach humanity status. Take my ex-boyfriend for example. Well after we broke up, he had the audacity to try and get me to sleep with him again. Well, it was time to knock him off his narcissistic pedestal and tell him the truth about himself... something I never did when we were together, maybe I should have.
The next time he said hello, there was no mention of sex. lol
It's always a boost to get a 6 for your work, nice words for your effort. I'd rather have a lot of people telling me I need a little work on something, than a handful of fake people telling me how great I am, so I'll tell them how wonderful they are!
A well stated poem, Debi. I liked it very much, very much indeed!
Susan :)
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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Well, Debi, sometimes one must be humiliated in order to reach humanity status. Take my ex-boyfriend for example. Well after we broke up, he had the audacity to try and get me to sleep with him again. Well, it was time to knock him off his narcissistic pedestal and tell him the truth about himself... something I never did when we were together, maybe I should have.
The next time he said hello, there was no mention of sex. lol
It's always a boost to get a 6 for your work, nice words for your effort. I'd rather have a lot of people telling me I need a little work on something, than a handful of fake people telling me how great I am, so I'll tell them how wonderful they are!
A well stated poem, Debi. I liked it very much, very much indeed!
Susan :)
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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Oh yes Susan, I do know what you mean. To get a six and a few suggestions is a prime review for me. And I am not saying that because I did that to you. But some people are insulted. And I try to always be kind. To know that they took the time to read and make the effort to help you , is priceless.
It's not like I want fours or less, who does? But some comments make me wonder if we were even talking about the same poem. I may be overly emotional, that is just me. But phony, never. And I see the same in you.
Thank you for this wonderful review and for your story. As long as it isn't a lie, I love hearing what people think of me and my poetry.
You gave your X the biggest gift, you could have ever given him.
I'm proud of you!! Yay Susan, you go girl. Lol!!!
Thanks again my sweet friend.
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I never lie... not anymore. I realized a long time ago that it's just not worth it. If you don't like whatever it is I'm talking about... oh well! LOL
I suppose that this is why these days, I'm so "Open mouth, insert leg to thigh" hahaha...
Nah... I've been like that forever, Debi! I never really had the aptitude for knowing what not to say. ;)
(sometimes I still don't)
Have a great night!
Susan :)
Comment from Anne Johnston
You have asked some very good questions here, and ones we should all consider. We need to take a good look at our attitudes periodically and make sure we are not lifting ourselves above others. Well done, Debi
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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You have asked some very good questions here, and ones we should all consider. We need to take a good look at our attitudes periodically and make sure we are not lifting ourselves above others. Well done, Debi
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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Thank you for reviewing and your comments for my poem.
Ann. I do appreciate it my friend
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You are welcome, Debi.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for this beautiful reminder not to be so full of yourself. God will often put something in our paths to remind us to humble. He's great about that. Maybe that's why He put this poem on your heart, NOT for you but for a reminder to those who read.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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Thank you for this beautiful reminder not to be so full of yourself. God will often put something in our paths to remind us to humble. He's great about that. Maybe that's why He put this poem on your heart, NOT for you but for a reminder to those who read.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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Thanks Barb! I am actually kinda hoping that it gives a few newbies who have come on board lately, some food for thought. I have seen so many great writers get ones and two's by people who won't take some kind advice and instead come here and completely tear people apart. I miss this place when it was so peaceful . I know when I first joined I watched for a half year before I wrote my first poem. And yet I had been writing my whole life. I can understand innocence where so many didn't know better than watched for a while and caught on. Some now are judging on whether it talks to them or not. But there is a big difference between innocence and arrogance and I hope people don't sit back and put up with. The rest of us don't treat each other that way and I tried so. Hard to. Help them to understand and they. Wouldn't listen.. sorry but my keyboard is going crazy. On me. I'm.glad. I wasn''t. Trying to write now.. i better. Go. Try. To reboot.. thank. You fo.r always. Being. So. Kind..
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You're a role model for so many people.
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God forgive me then Barb.
I just wrote a not so nice review to Tom Blanks because he clumped everyone together with his know it all theory. And people like you and Helen, Roy, I can go on and on. Do not deserve this arrogance,
This place was not like this when I first started here. All I have ever tried to do is get people to show that some of are like lifelines for each other. I know that the guilty ones have now left and not saying that there aren't some that cheat but he was being so so Thomas about itl lol...
my keyboard is going crazy and not taking my commands so thanks Barb for listening to my little rant. It is only because i love so many of you here and I think God will forgive me for having one day of a little anger here and there. You mean the world to me and just wanted you to hear it again, my very sweet friend.
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God forgive me then Barb.
I just wrote a not so nice review to Tom Blanks because he clumped everyone together with his know it all theory. And people like you and Helen, Roy, I can go on and on. Do not deserve this arrogance,
This place was not like this when I first started here. All I have ever tried to do is get people to show that some of are like lifelines for each other. I know that the guilty ones have now left and not saying that there aren't some that cheat but he was being so so Thomas about itl lol...
my keyboard is going crazy and not taking my commands so thanks Barb for listening to my little rant. It is only because i love so many of you here and I think God will forgive me for having one day of a little anger here and there. You mean the world to me and just wanted you to hear it again, my very sweet friend.
Comment from Ric Myworld
I don't read a lot of poetry, mainly because I don't know the first thing about it. But every now and then I run through for a change of pace and I always appreciate the time that I spend. This time, I'm about to post the last two chapters to my latest story and needed a little inspiration since it's way outside my comfort zone. LOL. Thanks for sharing. It's always a pleasure.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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I don't read a lot of poetry, mainly because I don't know the first thing about it. But every now and then I run through for a change of pace and I always appreciate the time that I spend. This time, I'm about to post the last two chapters to my latest story and needed a little inspiration since it's way outside my comfort zone. LOL. Thanks for sharing. It's always a pleasure.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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Once again Ric,thank you for you kind review of this poem.I am glad to have caught you on a break from your story. I plan on paying back the reviews after I am allowed a little more time w my sight after Spring Surgeries on my eyes.
Comment from Kerry L Batchelder
I can see why you received an award for this. It is intriguing and entertaiing as you wonder where it will lead us. I love the colors you chose, the illustration and the wording. Great job! I look forward to more of your work. I was previously a member and just rejoined FanStory.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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I can see why you received an award for this. It is intriguing and entertaiing as you wonder where it will lead us. I love the colors you chose, the illustration and the wording. Great job! I look forward to more of your work. I was previously a member and just rejoined FanStory.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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Dearest Kerry, Boy, am I ever late in thanking you for your wonderful reviews. Once again, I am so sorry. I am usually more on the ball, and I do truly appreciate this awesome package deal of your kind comments and generous six stars. Thank you so very much my dear friend. '
Comment from Kaiku
I`m thinking you might be pen pals with Roy, a top poet on this site. The messages embraced by the both of your writings ring very and God-fearing. Just a compliment.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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I`m thinking you might be pen pals with Roy, a top poet on this site. The messages embraced by the both of your writings ring very and God-fearing. Just a compliment.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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Thank you Kaiku, for you kind review and comments for my poem.
I sure appreciate it my friend