Abigail
A Little life that Almost Was47 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job, Irish, even though your poem was so
poignant. You led readers through your thoughts and feelings
well. I could see, and understood, everything you mentioned.
The art choice was a great addition. Thanks for the notes, too,
though they were very sad.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022
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You did a great job, Irish, even though your poem was so
poignant. You led readers through your thoughts and feelings
well. I could see, and understood, everything you mentioned.
The art choice was a great addition. Thanks for the notes, too,
though they were very sad.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 22-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022
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Hi Jan, thank you for reading, your understanding of the emotions, and all the stars! I knew the moment I saw that picture, that was the one!
irish
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Beautifully crafted with care, emotion and respect for life both past and present.
The beautiful, yet haunting image added impact and emotion to create a fine poem.
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022
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Beautifully crafted with care, emotion and respect for life both past and present.
The beautiful, yet haunting image added impact and emotion to create a fine poem.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 22-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022
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Thank you, Shirley, for reading, your kind comments, and all the stars!
irish
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You're very welcome
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Is there a bit of Yeats to what you write. Sadness reels throughout this piece for the loved lost that never was and yet when earthly sun sets that one last time, you'll see lil Abigail just like you imagined.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022
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Is there a bit of Yeats to what you write. Sadness reels throughout this piece for the loved lost that never was and yet when earthly sun sets that one last time, you'll see lil Abigail just like you imagined.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022
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Thank you, Tom, for reading, your kind comments, and all the stars! I am a firm believer in that last sunset, that we will be reunited with our lost loved ones. Blessings,
irish
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Irish,
What a touching poem. How very sad to lose a sibling or any member of your family before they've had a chance to make an impact in the world. You've captured the feelings of sorrow and of hope to come very well. Thanks so much for sharing.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022
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Hello Irish,
What a touching poem. How very sad to lose a sibling or any member of your family before they've had a chance to make an impact in the world. You've captured the feelings of sorrow and of hope to come very well. Thanks so much for sharing.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 21-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022
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Thank you, Tom, I appreciate your reading the memoir, your kind comments, and all the stars. I live in the Hope.
irish
Comment from LJbutterfly
This poem is so emotional, heartfelt and tender, it brings a tear to your eyes. I can see a father walking in a dream, through grass and flowers, toward his departed daughter. Your descriptions are vivid, and rhymes flow smoothly and tenderly. Stunning.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022
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This poem is so emotional, heartfelt and tender, it brings a tear to your eyes. I can see a father walking in a dream, through grass and flowers, toward his departed daughter. Your descriptions are vivid, and rhymes flow smoothly and tenderly. Stunning.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022
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Thank you, LJ, for reading, your encouraging comments (I am humbled!), and all the stars!
irish
Comment from evilynne
What a lovely heartfelt tribute to the spirit of a child that has passed from this world. I am sorry that I do not have six stars to give. The picture is lovely, as well. Evi
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022
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What a lovely heartfelt tribute to the spirit of a child that has passed from this world. I am sorry that I do not have six stars to give. The picture is lovely, as well. Evi
Comment Written 21-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022
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Thank you, Ev, for reading, your encouraging comments, and all the stars! It's the thought that counts!
irish
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I enjoyed reading your poem and story. It's very sad but well written, straight from the heart.
It moved along nicely and it was easy to understand and follow. Thank you for sharing.
Well done, my friend.
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022
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I enjoyed reading your poem and story. It's very sad but well written, straight from the heart.
It moved along nicely and it was easy to understand and follow. Thank you for sharing.
Well done, my friend.
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus
Comment Written 21-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022
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Thank you for reading, your encouraging comments, and all the stars!
Loved that saying from Atticus!
irish
Comment from nomi338
John, chapter 5, verses 28 and 29, promises that the day is coming when all those entombed in the grave will hear the master's voice and come out, restored to life. This is a hope and a promise that I hold on to in expectation of the hopeful reunion with my dear family members who have fallen asleep in death.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2022
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John, chapter 5, verses 28 and 29, promises that the day is coming when all those entombed in the grave will hear the master's voice and come out, restored to life. This is a hope and a promise that I hold on to in expectation of the hopeful reunion with my dear family members who have fallen asleep in death.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2022
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I am right with you there! Thank you for reading, your great quote from John %, and all the stars!
Merry Christmas!
irish
Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
Oh my God this is extraordinary I give you a virtual 6
my eyes came to tears reading this emotional read
wow, I have not read anything like this IN A LONG TIME!!
this is my all-time favorite poem I have ever read on fanstory
I have to so book mark this
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Oh my God this is extraordinary I give you a virtual 6
my eyes came to tears reading this emotional read
wow, I have not read anything like this IN A LONG TIME!!
this is my all-time favorite poem I have ever read on fanstory
I have to so book mark this
Comment Written 21-Dec-2022
Comment from jake cosmos aller
wow I love it. It is a great and moving tribute to the lost of a young girl and the impact that has on the remaining family members. Here in Korea there is a local custom called the 100 day ceremony. On those days friends and family gather to celebrate the first 100 days of a baby's birth. In the old days so many babies did not make it to celebrate their 100 birthday, once they have lived that long it is likely they will survive.
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wow I love it. It is a great and moving tribute to the lost of a young girl and the impact that has on the remaining family members. Here in Korea there is a local custom called the 100 day ceremony. On those days friends and family gather to celebrate the first 100 days of a baby's birth. In the old days so many babies did not make it to celebrate their 100 birthday, once they have lived that long it is likely they will survive.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2022