Hope
The power of hope47 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
As always, another of your very touching poem that are always a pleasure to read. Even with all the health issues and despair in faith there is hope. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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As always, another of your very touching poem that are always a pleasure to read. Even with all the health issues and despair in faith there is hope. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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Thank you for a wonderfully generous review. You are appreciated.
Comment from Begin Again
Hope is the glimmer of the candle in the distance, always providing us with a safe, peaceful spot to rest and be assured. I love the poem and what you shared. Only recently, I found that glimmer once again and I am blessed to be striving toward a better tomorrow once again. Thank you for sharing.
Hugs, Carol
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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Hope is the glimmer of the candle in the distance, always providing us with a safe, peaceful spot to rest and be assured. I love the poem and what you shared. Only recently, I found that glimmer once again and I am blessed to be striving toward a better tomorrow once again. Thank you for sharing.
Hugs, Carol
Comment Written 15-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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Thank you for an uplifting and heart warming review.
Comment from karenina
Perfectly inspired by Jesse's post! Love your moni rhymed stanzas and quite adept at framing your theme...
Hope, Faith, Absence of hope and patience/acceptance
I disagree with the reviewer that maintained hope is born from pain, necessarily.
I look in the eyes of an expectant mother and see hope...
Or the eyes of a child sleepily awakening to another beautiful dawn...
It is a conscious effort to maintain hope during trying times...
(I've recently been hacked and cleaned out financially!--I know a thing or two about choosing hope!(
Still? The kindness of others has buoyed my hope.
There are many more good people than evil...
Emi!y Dickinson wrote:
"Hope" is the thing with feathers -
That perches in the soul -
And sings the tune without the words -
And never stops - at all -
And sweetest - in the Gale - is heard -
And sore must be the storm -
That could abash the little Bird
That kept so many warm -
I've heard it in the chillest land -
And on the strangest Sea -
Yet - never - in Extremity,
It asked a crumb - of me."
Love your poem!
Karenina
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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Perfectly inspired by Jesse's post! Love your moni rhymed stanzas and quite adept at framing your theme...
Hope, Faith, Absence of hope and patience/acceptance
I disagree with the reviewer that maintained hope is born from pain, necessarily.
I look in the eyes of an expectant mother and see hope...
Or the eyes of a child sleepily awakening to another beautiful dawn...
It is a conscious effort to maintain hope during trying times...
(I've recently been hacked and cleaned out financially!--I know a thing or two about choosing hope!(
Still? The kindness of others has buoyed my hope.
There are many more good people than evil...
Emi!y Dickinson wrote:
"Hope" is the thing with feathers -
That perches in the soul -
And sings the tune without the words -
And never stops - at all -
And sweetest - in the Gale - is heard -
And sore must be the storm -
That could abash the little Bird
That kept so many warm -
I've heard it in the chillest land -
And on the strangest Sea -
Yet - never - in Extremity,
It asked a crumb - of me."
Love your poem!
Karenina
Comment Written 15-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much for the gift of your friendship, your kind and inspiring words. That you can do this in the face of the stunning wrong that has been done to you, speaks volumes about who you, yourself are as a loving and forgiving human being. Be assured the God that sees all, knows all and does naught but good to those who believe in him, will not let this wrong go unpunished. I love you, all of us here at FanStory love you and pray for the justice you deserve.
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Your poem was yet another blessing from God, reminding me evil will not ever triumph!
Bless You!
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. It is clear and concise. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. It is clear and concise. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your review comments.
Comment from Paul McFarland
This is a good one, Nolan. I think you could trim up the meter a little. The third stanza is a really good one. You have written some great advice inn your notes.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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This is a good one, Nolan. I think you could trim up the meter a little. The third stanza is a really good one. You have written some great advice inn your notes.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Thank you. I appreciate your input.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and good presentation, nomi.
-Your notes are appreciated, as well as sharing the inspiration
you had from Jesse's writing. I am sure he was happy to see that.
-You wrote a good poem with effective imagery and rhyme.
-Very good contrasts in verse one, along with internal rhyme.
-Effective nature imagery in verse two, along with a positive message.
-Good questions in verse three and I particularly line the last line.
-A very good concluding verse showing what you strive for.
-Very well done!!!
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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-Very nice artwork and good presentation, nomi.
-Your notes are appreciated, as well as sharing the inspiration
you had from Jesse's writing. I am sure he was happy to see that.
-You wrote a good poem with effective imagery and rhyme.
-Very good contrasts in verse one, along with internal rhyme.
-Effective nature imagery in verse two, along with a positive message.
-Good questions in verse three and I particularly line the last line.
-A very good concluding verse showing what you strive for.
-Very well done!!!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much. Your generous response is heart warming and uplifting.
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You are very welcome, and I appreciate your reply.
Comment from Regina Elliott
The love of the Lord and Hope helps so many of us
here on the earth go on.
The effort of carrying on for
our families, our faith, and
with the beauty of hope is
paramount in our lives.
Superb writing, nomi!
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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The love of the Lord and Hope helps so many of us
here on the earth go on.
The effort of carrying on for
our families, our faith, and
with the beauty of hope is
paramount in our lives.
Superb writing, nomi!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much. I love your written responses.
Comment from godlucifer
the message was powerful and inspiring. your thoughts and rhyming was well thought with a clear cut picture. your poem was truly a pleasure to read. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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the message was powerful and inspiring. your thoughts and rhyming was well thought with a clear cut picture. your poem was truly a pleasure to read. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
Comment Written 14-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your generous review comments.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and very well written poem you have penned about hope. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from the art work you chose. Thank you for sharing. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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This is a very beautiful and very well written poem you have penned about hope. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from the art work you chose. Thank you for sharing. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 14-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Thank you Teri. I very much appreciate your fine review comments.
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you are so very welcome!!!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Insightful. Well thought out. Truthful.
I would have written some lines differently. So what Tom; this ain't your piece and Nomi338 has won many first places, and has been published.
Unfair for not fair, etc., etceteras. I love it tho as it was.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Insightful. Well thought out. Truthful.
I would have written some lines differently. So what Tom; this ain't your piece and Nomi338 has won many first places, and has been published.
Unfair for not fair, etc., etceteras. I love it tho as it was.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Thank you, and please know, I have never been so full of myself that I would be unwilling to hear and entertain the thoughtful suggestions of fellow writers, thinkers and planners. So, let's hear what you got.
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Yours are fine on a second read though i would have ended line three with unfair and nothing for naught. Also lines 11 and 12 seem to me to have1 or 2 many syllables. Be well.
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Your suggestions have value, However I was not concerned with syllable count, I was going with feelings more than style.
