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Comment from BOO ghost
This is peacock ð?¦? Paradise. A rainbow of colors. Eye pleasing presentation. The words blend in like mixing oil colors and painting on canvas. This is art. (Strawberry Moon) is perfect! Deep in desire. Alliteration. Always appreciate the author notes. I like Japanese poetry. I was stationed in Japan. Compai means cheers. Hum, there's the blood moon and strawberry Moon. First time that I have heard of strawberry Moon. I read that it's in June. Beautiful sight!
Count your lucky stars!
Gezz, BOO Ghost can barely keep up with you guys! Yaw posting maniacs. That trophy glimmers, right?
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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This is peacock ð?¦? Paradise. A rainbow of colors. Eye pleasing presentation. The words blend in like mixing oil colors and painting on canvas. This is art. (Strawberry Moon) is perfect! Deep in desire. Alliteration. Always appreciate the author notes. I like Japanese poetry. I was stationed in Japan. Compai means cheers. Hum, there's the blood moon and strawberry Moon. First time that I have heard of strawberry Moon. I read that it's in June. Beautiful sight!
Count your lucky stars!
Gezz, BOO Ghost can barely keep up with you guys! Yaw posting maniacs. That trophy glimmers, right?
Comment Written 10-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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LoL yeah, I write two poems a day ... rain or shine
I appreciate your insightful and kind review. Have a lovely day.... or night.
Gypsy hugs
"Love the ones who understand you and forget the ones that don't." - Nikki Rowe
Comment from lyenochka
I like how you help us meld a chocolate-covered strawberry with the strawberry moon casting romantic moods between lovers. I almost wish that it was "lover" instead of "man" but I know you worked hard to work those syllables just right.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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I like how you help us meld a chocolate-covered strawberry with the strawberry moon casting romantic moods between lovers. I almost wish that it was "lover" instead of "man" but I know you worked hard to work those syllables just right.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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I had lover before I chose man. I made the change. It does sound better.
Thank you very much for your exceptional review. You always know what I mean. I love you, big sister.
Marival ❤️
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Love you, too!! 💖😊
Comment from Ricky1024
"Strawberry Moon"
This Tanka is not Only Beautiful but tasty too!
The Strawberry Moon dripping with Hershey's Syrup!
Don't forget that Cherry on Top!
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Well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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"Strawberry Moon"
This Tanka is not Only Beautiful but tasty too!
The Strawberry Moon dripping with Hershey's Syrup!
Don't forget that Cherry on Top!
...
Well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 09-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and helpfull feedback. You are very kind.
Gypsy
Comment from dellsworthpoet
A very romantic poem. The flow is good. The presentation adds to the overall atmosphere. The last two lines tie it up well.
It is an interesting thought that chocolate can be bitter, bitter-sweet, milky-rich, or cloyingly sweet. Perhaps that makes the poem more realistic and less romantic.
Thanks for a good read.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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A very romantic poem. The flow is good. The presentation adds to the overall atmosphere. The last two lines tie it up well.
It is an interesting thought that chocolate can be bitter, bitter-sweet, milky-rich, or cloyingly sweet. Perhaps that makes the poem more realistic and less romantic.
Thanks for a good read.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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Bitter chocolate? No it's milk chocolate, the kind I like. Thank you very much for your excellent review and helpfull feedback. You are very kind.
Gypsy
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You are welcome.
Comment from prettybluebirds
This is another of your beautiful creations. I found the footnotes most interesting, especially about most Tanka poets being women. I enjoyed reading this lovey poem and look forward to your next one.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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This is another of your beautiful creations. I found the footnotes most interesting, especially about most Tanka poets being women. I enjoyed reading this lovey poem and look forward to your next one.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and helpfull feedback. You are very kind.
Gypsy
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
Whew! this is a steamy entry. It's beautifully written and presented. Looking for some chocolate covered love makes me think you are crossing the racial divided. LOL I must say I approve. Guess, I will be calling you Sistah Gypsy from now on. lol On a serious note, I love your poem and how you presented it.
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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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Whew! this is a steamy entry. It's beautifully written and presented. Looking for some chocolate covered love makes me think you are crossing the racial divided. LOL I must say I approve. Guess, I will be calling you Sistah Gypsy from now on. lol On a serious note, I love your poem and how you presented it.
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Comment Written 09-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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,'Sister Gypsy'... I like the sound of that. LoL
Different friends in fanstory call me Different names.... Gypsy Queen, sensei (teacher in Japanese), little sister, Reina gitana, etc... lol. It's true.
Ms Sandy,
Thank you very much for your excellent review and helpfull feedback. You are very kind.
Gypsy
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You are welcome. Your work is easy to like; all I must do is show up at your page. lol
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, what a beautiful and well written Tanka you have penned my friend. You used very good descriptive words and lovely imagery from the art work you chose. I enjoyed reading about Yosano Akiko and all she did. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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Gypsy, what a beautiful and well written Tanka you have penned my friend. You used very good descriptive words and lovely imagery from the art work you chose. I enjoyed reading about Yosano Akiko and all she did. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
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Comment Written 09-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and helpfull feedback. You are very kind.
Gypsy