Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I am disappointed that the robot died Bill? This story had so much potential to continue? Or maybe you have a miracle up your sleeve? A fun technical write full of futuristic traits. Love Dolly x

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022

I still have some robot senders, who may have another robot or two.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is very well written about the robot. It is so neat that you let the robot say what one of the men said to the robot - God with God! Very good job my friend. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022

Thanks, Teri

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

I see this is a savvy robot. It avoids using personal pronouns. It also realizes that sometimes it comes down to luck. Great Go with God ending, and to think it comes from a robot. Great picture, and so appropriate. judi

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022

Thank you, Judi.

reply by judiverse on 10-Nov-2022

You're very welcome. judi

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

Oh, I'm sorry you've finished this. I suppose once the Robots terminated themselves the Humans could come back. I loved, loved the ending... Go with God... Lol, the Robot did take it on board. Very well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022

Thank you, Sandra

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Oh, Robot remembered the "Go with God" that was sent with him on his mission. So if they release "the genetic materials within" will this repopulate the Earth with real life forms?


and seconary phases of (secondary?)

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022

My keyboard is stingy with Ds.

reply by lyenochka on 09-Nov-2022

Lol. I keep saying you need a new wireless keyboard. 😊

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

Well, despite all your problems, this short story sounds pretty good. The dialogue was excellent and is what told the story. The artwork adds a lot to the meaning of the story, too. Nice work.

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022

Thanks, PBB

Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

I'm surprised there would be a lack of following for your story. I wonder ... were the computer glitches connected with the FS Editor? or your own computer?

I thought your last three words were classic, and immediately guffaw-producing. When your think of the Robot as man's ultimate self-appraising ego trip, to say, "Go with God!" is sublime irony.

Jay

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022

My laptop is late for the landfill, Jay. Imagine writing an entire chapter and having it blink away. Quite frustrating.

reply by Jay Squires on 09-Nov-2022

Oh, I'm so sorry, Bill. That can be devastating. I got out of the habit of backing everything up every night. It should be a habit. Hope things look up for you.

Jay

Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

I think I missed at least one. I try, but time is so short in November. I liked the re-iteration of the order used in one of the posts I did read. Presumably it's the same robot who assimilated into his data banks what he had heard. Kate xx

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022

There are two robots.

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

It's nice to see a robot have more faith in God and some humans. It may be why they're still going. I'm enjoying your new book and thank you for sharing. Sending my very best today as always, Sal XOs

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 Comment Written 09-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022

Thank you, Sal