Random Rhyme and Petty Prose
Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "Robot On the Ground"a collection of phenomenally mundane work.
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Comment from Mary Vigasin
Not even life in the ocean survived the robot's destruction. Just to be certain he did recognizance of the earth to make sure that the destruction was complete. Then he heard a ping.
You keep our interest by leaving us wondering what comes next.
Brilliant and creative. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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Not even life in the ocean survived the robot's destruction. Just to be certain he did recognizance of the earth to make sure that the destruction was complete. Then he heard a ping.
You keep our interest by leaving us wondering what comes next.
Brilliant and creative. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 09-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Mary.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It sounds like we could all be in trouble here, but the robot has landed in a remote area on earth and I am wondering where he could be? I expect it has to be in America somewhere? He he he, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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It sounds like we could all be in trouble here, but the robot has landed in a remote area on earth and I am wondering where he could be? I expect it has to be in America somewhere? He he he, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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It may be more familiar with that region. : )
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Go on Bill, try India or China or even Australia! A robot would fit in well with the Aussies, they wouldn?t even think it was strange! Ha ha ha, love Dolly x
Comment from BOO ghost
Woohoo! You pay a tidy sum. Prose is my specialty and craft. I know about the Mariana Trench. I was an AW and tracked submarines in oceans. (Anti Submarine Warfare Operator.) Different types of subs have different crush depths.
Some people speculate that flight 19 ditched into the ocean due to gases rises from air pockets or bubbles rising. The gases stalled the engines. That one hypothesis. Earthquakes can probably release pockets of trapped gas beneath the Earth's mantle. I'm familiar with the Indian ocean. Yeah, I pinged a lot of active sonobuoys while tracking submarines. The pinging sound produces a lot of decibels. Is Robot 3.7 fact or fiction? I'm not familiar. Intriguing story. Educational. Count your � lucky stars!
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Woohoo! You pay a tidy sum. Prose is my specialty and craft. I know about the Mariana Trench. I was an AW and tracked submarines in oceans. (Anti Submarine Warfare Operator.) Different types of subs have different crush depths.
Some people speculate that flight 19 ditched into the ocean due to gases rises from air pockets or bubbles rising. The gases stalled the engines. That one hypothesis. Earthquakes can probably release pockets of trapped gas beneath the Earth's mantle. I'm familiar with the Indian ocean. Yeah, I pinged a lot of active sonobuoys while tracking submarines. The pinging sound produces a lot of decibels. Is Robot 3.7 fact or fiction? I'm not familiar. Intriguing story. Educational. Count your � lucky stars!
Comment Written 09-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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This is future fiction. Earth has been zapped and left lifeless. Robot is ensuring that nothing remains before terraforming. After signaling there is no life, it receives a return ping indicating there is life.
Comment from susand3022
A ping, Bill? Is it a life form ping? Is there hope for us yet?? Did we find a way to survive a tragic demise? (I've only read the last couple of chapters. Should I go back? Should I get caught up? Idk... it's election night and I'm hoping that the blood moon tonight wasn't a prediction of things to come...
Susan
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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A ping, Bill? Is it a life form ping? Is there hope for us yet?? Did we find a way to survive a tragic demise? (I've only read the last couple of chapters. Should I go back? Should I get caught up? Idk... it's election night and I'm hoping that the blood moon tonight wasn't a prediction of things to come...
Susan
Comment Written 08-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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There are only three sections so far, Susan: Robot Saves the Day, where it is sent and detonates on Earth; Robot Paves the Way; where another robot is sent, and the focus is more on the senders; and Robot on the Ground.
Comment from nomi338
Uh oh, Bill, where you hiding? I somehow knew, I just knew that you would be the one someone to thwart the Robot's mission. I hope you know that you will not be able to hide indefinitely. He will find you, and then, and then? Unh, unh, and then along will come Jones. Ha, ha ha.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Uh oh, Bill, where you hiding? I somehow knew, I just knew that you would be the one someone to thwart the Robot's mission. I hope you know that you will not be able to hide indefinitely. He will find you, and then, and then? Unh, unh, and then along will come Jones. Ha, ha ha.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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It's not me, though that would be funny.
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I thought so. I am still grinning at the thought.
Comment from Sally Law
Proof of life is hard to find, even in my morning scan. A ping is good. I heard one today. A delightful chapter for your book, always with a smile. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Proof of life is hard to find, even in my morning scan. A ping is good. I heard one today. A delightful chapter for your book, always with a smile. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 08-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Sal
Comment from royowen
What an excellent post, no life in the ocean, and now no life above it either. This would have been a great entry in a flash fiction contest, this is beautifully written my friend, well done Bill, great job, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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What an excellent post, no life in the ocean, and now no life above it either. This would have been a great entry in a flash fiction contest, this is beautifully written my friend, well done Bill, great job, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Roy
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Welcome
Comment from JoannaN
This could be a splendid material for a short movie or even an animated movie. This ping at the end is so ominous. I suppose the poor little robot can be now on the verge of going up in flames or exploding. Poor robot :)
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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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This could be a splendid material for a short movie or even an animated movie. This ping at the end is so ominous. I suppose the poor little robot can be now on the verge of going up in flames or exploding. Poor robot :)
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Comment Written 08-Nov-2022
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Thanks, Joanna
Comment from lyenochka
Whoa. Nothing? No life when the oceans are normally teeming with life forms? Not even sponges or coral? Yikes! Whatever happened? But then there was that one ping. I hope it's not a roach...
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Whoa. Nothing? No life when the oceans are normally teeming with life forms? Not even sponges or coral? Yikes! Whatever happened? But then there was that one ping. I hope it's not a roach...
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Comment Written 08-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Robot Saves the Day happened.
