Random Rhyme and Petty Prose
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "Robot Paves the Way "a collection of phenomenally mundane work.
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Comment from Thesis
An interesting post that transcends the logic of humanistic vs. programmed dialogue with a non-life form. the clarification that he just wished the robot luck was interesting.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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An interesting post that transcends the logic of humanistic vs. programmed dialogue with a non-life form. the clarification that he just wished the robot luck was interesting.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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I believe some programmers want to think they are creating life, not machines.
Comment from BethShelby
I don't think the robot appreciate in farewell gesture. It is a little concertning that there are no life forms on the surface of the earth. I hope the all went underground. Someone much have tipped them off.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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I don't think the robot appreciate in farewell gesture. It is a little concertning that there are no life forms on the surface of the earth. I hope the all went underground. Someone much have tipped them off.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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Robot will be the hero of this piece, I think.
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Well I was concerned that he might be on a Kamikaze mission.
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You should read *Robot Saves the Day*
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is very nice Bill. Just one point (miniscule). As In the last chapter I read Robot set to Earth detonated, maybe it should be like Apollo, and you should give them numbers? Just a thought. Kate xx
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This is very nice Bill. Just one point (miniscule). As In the last chapter I read Robot set to Earth detonated, maybe it should be like Apollo, and you should give them numbers? Just a thought. Kate xx
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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I had hoped to generate interest for the first story by leaving robot uncapitalized and without an article. I guess everyone figured I didn't know what I was doing. I went back and capitalized them all. Here, I was hoping that leaving out a numbering system would speak to the isolation of each action taken by the engineers. I guess those ideas are better when explained in the notes.
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Yes, please do!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Well the robot is released on earth and we will see what sort of damage it will cause. With your sense of humour I can see this series lasting quite a while Bill, I am looking forward to it, love Dolly x
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Well the robot is released on earth and we will see what sort of damage it will cause. With your sense of humour I can see this series lasting quite a while Bill, I am looking forward to it, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Dolly.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting and well written short story you have penned about the robot. I love when he said to Robot to go with God. I think it freaked the other person out. I think it freaked the one out that he was heard. We can't deny our God. Thank you for sharing. Teri
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This is a very interesting and well written short story you have penned about the robot. I love when he said to Robot to go with God. I think it freaked the other person out. I think it freaked the one out that he was heard. We can't deny our God. Thank you for sharing. Teri
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Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from Sally Law
Aw, politically correct and maybe the robot was programmed by someone like me! This is fun with a bit of smoking poke. Delightful chapter in your book. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
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Aw, politically correct and maybe the robot was programmed by someone like me! This is fun with a bit of smoking poke. Delightful chapter in your book. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
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Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Sal.
