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Unfathomable You

A poem

40 total reviews 
Comment from Carolann Renaud
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Owen, I have no sixes left but pumped you4 times. It is worth it to me. Thank you for this wonderful writing to the glory of God. As always your poetry skill is perfect but, how can it not be surpassed when God-given, it is used to magnify His perfection? God Bless you, as I suspect He does! Lol.
because of Him,
Carolann

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
    Thanks so much Carolann for these excellent comments and a terrific, review, and those generous pumps, blessings Roy
Comment from GWHARGIS
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Out of sixes but know I wanted to send one extra star to you. What I liked about this one was that it seemed like a love poem. Then as I read it took on a deeper meaning. The ultimate love story. The gift of live and acceptance that is and always will be unmatched. Beautifully written. Gretchen

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
    Thanks so much Gretchen, for these excellent comments and a terrific review, blessings Roy
Comment from BethShelby
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This is a very expressive free verse poem about the amazing love of God. You have worded it in such a way that it could like the poetry of the Bible such as you might find in the Psalms.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
    Thanks so much Beth, for these excellent comments and a terrific review, blessings Roy
Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, Unfathomable You, describes the indescribable feeling of having the Creator of Heaven and Earth as a savior and personal friend for all time.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
    Thanks so much Bill, for these excellent comments and a terrific review, blessings Roy
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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God's love is infinite, but it is scary, too. He is so good, I am not. He loves me even though I'm not what He hoped I'd be. I wonder how I will be able to face Him and look into His eyes. Your poem tells us of His amazing love and forgiveness He has given us by sending His son Jesus. I've known that since I could understand who God is. Now I'm old, I'm scared. I wish I could be like you. Love and hugs, dear friend. :)) Sandra xxxx

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
    Thanks so much Sandra, for these excellent comments and a terrific review, blessings Roy
Comment from lancellot
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This is nice. I will not answer any of the questions. Though one or two seem that could apply to something other than God, but I get your feeling here.

A well crafted poem.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
    Thanks so much for these excellent comments and a terrific review, blessings Roy
Comment from MissMerri
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I'm pretty sure this is the best poem by you that I've ever read. I am so glad I have a six to give because it deserves nothing less. You've expressed so beautifully something I feel and could never express as well as you did. Thank you for writing this, and please do write more free verse. This was amazing, God-glorifying poetry. We could use more of this, don't you think?

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
    Thanks so much Adonna, for these excellent comments and a terrific review, blessings Roy
Comment from harmony13
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The author's words are engaging, beyond measure, clear, descriptive and creative. The word of this poem were filled with adoration and love for God. I pondered on the last line and how we are love unconditionally. The author's notes compliment this poem. The artwork goes well with the theme and words of this poem. Great Poem, Roy!

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
    Thanks Maria, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Wendy G
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I really like this one, resembling some of the writing of the psalms, and also Paul. It's different from your usual style, but works well to reflect God's unfathomable love. Well done.
Wendy

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
    Thanks Wendy, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Boogienights
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This is a beautiful poem, it really tells a story of how God loves us all, no matter what the circumstances. I really do admire your work, thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
    Thanks for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy