Unfathomable You
A poem40 total reviews
Comment from Carolann Renaud
Owen, I have no sixes left but pumped you4 times. It is worth it to me. Thank you for this wonderful writing to the glory of God. As always your poetry skill is perfect but, how can it not be surpassed when God-given, it is used to magnify His perfection? God Bless you, as I suspect He does! Lol.
because of Him,
Carolann
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
Owen, I have no sixes left but pumped you4 times. It is worth it to me. Thank you for this wonderful writing to the glory of God. As always your poetry skill is perfect but, how can it not be surpassed when God-given, it is used to magnify His perfection? God Bless you, as I suspect He does! Lol.
because of Him,
Carolann
Comment Written 05-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much Carolann for these excellent comments and a terrific, review, and those generous pumps, blessings Roy
Comment from GWHARGIS
Out of sixes but know I wanted to send one extra star to you. What I liked about this one was that it seemed like a love poem. Then as I read it took on a deeper meaning. The ultimate love story. The gift of live and acceptance that is and always will be unmatched. Beautifully written. Gretchen
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
Out of sixes but know I wanted to send one extra star to you. What I liked about this one was that it seemed like a love poem. Then as I read it took on a deeper meaning. The ultimate love story. The gift of live and acceptance that is and always will be unmatched. Beautifully written. Gretchen
Comment Written 05-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much Gretchen, for these excellent comments and a terrific review, blessings Roy
Comment from BethShelby
This is a very expressive free verse poem about the amazing love of God. You have worded it in such a way that it could like the poetry of the Bible such as you might find in the Psalms.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
This is a very expressive free verse poem about the amazing love of God. You have worded it in such a way that it could like the poetry of the Bible such as you might find in the Psalms.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much Beth, for these excellent comments and a terrific review, blessings Roy
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Unfathomable You, describes the indescribable feeling of having the Creator of Heaven and Earth as a savior and personal friend for all time.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
This poem, Unfathomable You, describes the indescribable feeling of having the Creator of Heaven and Earth as a savior and personal friend for all time.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much Bill, for these excellent comments and a terrific review, blessings Roy
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
God's love is infinite, but it is scary, too. He is so good, I am not. He loves me even though I'm not what He hoped I'd be. I wonder how I will be able to face Him and look into His eyes. Your poem tells us of His amazing love and forgiveness He has given us by sending His son Jesus. I've known that since I could understand who God is. Now I'm old, I'm scared. I wish I could be like you. Love and hugs, dear friend. :)) Sandra xxxx
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
God's love is infinite, but it is scary, too. He is so good, I am not. He loves me even though I'm not what He hoped I'd be. I wonder how I will be able to face Him and look into His eyes. Your poem tells us of His amazing love and forgiveness He has given us by sending His son Jesus. I've known that since I could understand who God is. Now I'm old, I'm scared. I wish I could be like you. Love and hugs, dear friend. :)) Sandra xxxx
Comment Written 05-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much Sandra, for these excellent comments and a terrific review, blessings Roy
Comment from lancellot
This is nice. I will not answer any of the questions. Though one or two seem that could apply to something other than God, but I get your feeling here.
A well crafted poem.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
This is nice. I will not answer any of the questions. Though one or two seem that could apply to something other than God, but I get your feeling here.
A well crafted poem.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much for these excellent comments and a terrific review, blessings Roy
Comment from MissMerri
I'm pretty sure this is the best poem by you that I've ever read. I am so glad I have a six to give because it deserves nothing less. You've expressed so beautifully something I feel and could never express as well as you did. Thank you for writing this, and please do write more free verse. This was amazing, God-glorifying poetry. We could use more of this, don't you think?
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
I'm pretty sure this is the best poem by you that I've ever read. I am so glad I have a six to give because it deserves nothing less. You've expressed so beautifully something I feel and could never express as well as you did. Thank you for writing this, and please do write more free verse. This was amazing, God-glorifying poetry. We could use more of this, don't you think?
Comment Written 04-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much Adonna, for these excellent comments and a terrific review, blessings Roy
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are engaging, beyond measure, clear, descriptive and creative. The word of this poem were filled with adoration and love for God. I pondered on the last line and how we are love unconditionally. The author's notes compliment this poem. The artwork goes well with the theme and words of this poem. Great Poem, Roy!
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
The author's words are engaging, beyond measure, clear, descriptive and creative. The word of this poem were filled with adoration and love for God. I pondered on the last line and how we are love unconditionally. The author's notes compliment this poem. The artwork goes well with the theme and words of this poem. Great Poem, Roy!
Comment Written 04-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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Thanks Maria, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Wendy G
I really like this one, resembling some of the writing of the psalms, and also Paul. It's different from your usual style, but works well to reflect God's unfathomable love. Well done.
Wendy
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
I really like this one, resembling some of the writing of the psalms, and also Paul. It's different from your usual style, but works well to reflect God's unfathomable love. Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 04-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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Thanks Wendy, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Boogienights
This is a beautiful poem, it really tells a story of how God loves us all, no matter what the circumstances. I really do admire your work, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
This is a beautiful poem, it really tells a story of how God loves us all, no matter what the circumstances. I really do admire your work, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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Thanks for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy