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Comment from Jesse James Doty
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This is a well-written poem. It catches the essence of the woodpecker and tells in a majestic way how they help us to live more peacefully and with nature.
I love the picture it adds a sense of class to this excellent piece.
Thank you for sharing this awesome poem.
I love it and hope you win the contest!
Jesse

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
    Thank you very much Jesse for such a kind review and comments for my Pileated Prince poem. He is really a fascinating bird and the DNR tagged him a while back and measured him. He is 21 inches when standing tall and when they stretched him. Thanks also for your kind comment about the contest. Appreciated my dear friend.
reply by Jesse James Doty on 04-Nov-2022
    21 inches is pretty tall! I love how you take a real interest in birds such as the woodpecker!
    Jesse
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
    Lol, He is cool to look at so I did my research on them before writing my poem. Imagine the man being loyal, while the wife is fooling around. Lol!
Comment from Carolann Renaud
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I truly wish I had 6 stars for this wonderful poetic tribute to This feathered friend. Thank you for telling an entertaining and educational story . Your content and structure flow well and is an easy enjoyable read. Keep writing and sharing your gift.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
    Thank yous
    Awe, thank you so very much Carolann! And what a beautiful name that is. You are so sweet and I appreciate your very lovely words. Thank you for reviewing my Pileated post. So appreciated!
    Thank you again my friend.
reply by Carolann Renaud on 04-Nov-2022
    you are welcome
Comment from LateBloomer
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Hello Author, your poem is so sweet and endearing. I could see the whole scene. This woodpecker is quite debonair in his black attire. I hope his woman's hair looks as great as his.

I especially liked:
He'll keep his vows for life, while his wife is out there cheating

(Lol - now that's a switch, but I'm sure there are many men who are faithful and true to their wives.)

Great photo. Silky rhyming. A pleasure to read. This poem made me smile. LateBloomer

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
    Awe thank you Margaret. You are so sweet and I truly appreciate you lovely comments more than you could possibly know. Thanks again my dear friend!
Comment from Boogienights
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Woodpeckers are so amazing and the sounds they make are so loud, they can be heard from miles away. They are also very beautiful birds in my opinion, you are very lucky indeed. Best of luck in the contest. :)

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
    Thanks so much Sharon,! Yes, they are are amazing. The Pileated ones are much larger and only live in highly wooded areas. This particular one was tagged and measured by the DNR and he is 21inches when standing tall. Quite a beautiful sight. Thanks for the lovely review, my friend!
Comment from susand3022
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Wow, Author! Two feet tall? Are you sure that's a woodpecker and not a vulture? lol I loved this poem, it's really fun to read. I loved the way you gave them those romantic, yet very human characteristics. Well done! Good luck with the contest!
Susan :)

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
    Thanks so much Susan! Thanks for your lovely comments about me romanticizing the poem. I appreciate that very much. Yes, they are are amazing. The Pileated ones are much larger and only live in highly wooded areas. This particular one was tagged and measured by the DNR and he is 21inches when standing tall. Quite a beautiful sight. Thanks for the lovely review, my friend!
Comment from nomi338
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Well, well Woody. It is very nice of you to pay us a visit here at FanStory. By the way, I thoroughly enjoyed the cartoons that highlighted your goofy antics. And your laugh was the distinctive most. Good luck in the contest. I really enjoyed the poem.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
    Thank you kind sir for the very kind review and comments. That should perk up ole Woody. He has been down a little since he never knows when his Mrs will be on the prowl. Darn pileated females. Yet he stays just as loyal as always to her. Lol... Thank you my sweet friend for such a wonderfully fun review and comments!!
Comment from June Sargent
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We have one who is a regular visitor across the street - but not quite as majestic as your Woody. He makes quite a racket when he's around - and we miss him when he's not.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
    They truly are a territorial bird. They don't migrate and one bird usually frequents about a ten mile span. But he always comes back to the houses that give the best treats. Lol! Thanks for the kind and fun review and comments my dear friend. You are so sweet, June!
Comment from Paul McFarland
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One of my favorite birds. We have a few around my place, but I have never seen one at my feeders. That is a great video, and you have done a nice job with the poem.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
    Thanks Paul, and you kind of seem like the kind who would also enjoy them. They are not actually on the endangered species list yet, but some others in South America. They are just a little different than these. It is funny to hear their funny sounds that really do sound like laughs. Our Woody has been a little down lately, since the Mrs has been on the prowl again, yet he is such a good guy that he stays loyal to her. That is weird that if God was going to make a bird or critter that was either loyal or not, you'd think that both would be the same. But then again, look at some people. Anyway, thanks my dear friend for the very kind review and comments.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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I suspect this is a blind entry for I see nothing to identify who the author is or where they are from. Let me guess the Land Down Under, or the Dark Continent. Where else are birds two feet long found. Oh, yes, the vultures of Andes and the Eagles of the snow-bound North. Well down my supportive friend of downy visitors.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
    Nope Tom, we are talking MN. This particular bird that frequents are house has been actually measured by the DNR and has a tag on it. He is 21 inches when he stretches out, but his wife is such a floozy that he has to stand tall every once in a while to watch for her a little bit better when she goes on the prowl. Yet the poor guy stays loyal to her all the time. Thanks my awesome friend for the very kind review and comments.
reply by Tom Horonzy on 03-Nov-2022
    My pleasure
Comment from Sally Law
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Virtual six, mystery poet! What a stunning woodpecker and lovely presentation. Dig the head dress! I can honestly say we don't have them that large down here. We have red-headed woodpeckers, and by contrast are much smaller. Thank you for the video too. A pleasure for my reviewing day.

Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally Law :)) XOs

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
    Thank you so much Sally. Actually this particular bird that likes our treats better than anyone else is 21 inches and the kids named him Woody. Yet the cartoon character was the redheaded woodpecker and we have those too. The reason we know his size is because the DNR tagged him and told us. They have to be big so he can watch out for the Mrs who is constantly on the prowl. Darn pileated women nowadays . Thanks so much my dear friend for the very kind review and comments.
reply by Sally Law on 04-Nov-2022
    You're most welcome! My best for the contest! Sal :)) XOs