Random Rhyme and Petty Prose
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Comment from BethShelby
That is a clever way of putting it. I've had no goblins in the twenty years I've lived on this mountain a quarter mile off the street, and if I do any gobblin' at Thankgiving time in won't be on a won't be on turkey gobbler. Those birds are safe from me. I don't even cook them any more.
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That is a clever way of putting it. I've had no goblins in the twenty years I've lived on this mountain a quarter mile off the street, and if I do any gobblin' at Thankgiving time in won't be on a won't be on turkey gobbler. Those birds are safe from me. I don't even cook them any more.
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Thank you, Beth
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is an extremely amusing and apt play on words. I enjoyed the wicked sense of humour you displayed here very much. Thanks for sharing this concise post. Kate xx
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This is an extremely amusing and apt play on words. I enjoyed the wicked sense of humour you displayed here very much. Thanks for sharing this concise post. Kate xx
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Thanks, Kate
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Thanks, Kate
Comment from Spitfire
A wonderful play on words with 'goblin' evolving into 'gobbling'. I like the format too. I'll take turkey and cranberry sauce anytime over a bag of candy.
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A wonderful play on words with 'goblin' evolving into 'gobbling'. I like the format too. I'll take turkey and cranberry sauce anytime over a bag of candy.
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Marine Corps birthday on November 10th. 247
Comment from nomi338
Forget about ghosts and goblins, give me the platter filled with some of the best food I will consume all year. Candy may be dandy, and liquor may be quicker. The food from Thanksgiving, could make your waist band thicker.
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Forget about ghosts and goblins, give me the platter filled with some of the best food I will consume all year. Candy may be dandy, and liquor may be quicker. The food from Thanksgiving, could make your waist band thicker.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
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Thanksgiving beats Halloween hands downs.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Haha. I see the one letter difference between "goblins" and "gobblin". Why did you put a " ' " in the end of the "gobblin"? Is this a piece of prose or poetry?
Well done.
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Haha. I see the one letter difference between "goblins" and "gobblin". Why did you put a " ' " in the end of the "gobblin"? Is this a piece of prose or poetry?
Well done.
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The apostrophe replaces the missing G from gobbling.
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. I like the pun of "goblins" and "gobblin'" down that Thanksgiving feast! That also means the year is winding down. I hope you have lots of fun autumn gatherings with your family!
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Lol. I like the pun of "goblins" and "gobblin'" down that Thanksgiving feast! That also means the year is winding down. I hope you have lots of fun autumn gatherings with your family!
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Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
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Happy holidays to you, Helen
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That is brilliant, Bill. The Goblin, and gobblin' This one has to win, my friend, it is perfect. The Goblin that comes with Halloween, and gobbling up the food the next month. That is just so clever. Well done, and good luck! :) Sandra xxxx
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That is brilliant, Bill. The Goblin, and gobblin' This one has to win, my friend, it is perfect. The Goblin that comes with Halloween, and gobbling up the food the next month. That is just so clever. Well done, and good luck! :) Sandra xxxx
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Thank you, Sandra
