Pantygynt's Passion
Rhyming verse50 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
During all my years on Fan Story, I've never participated in a class! Your poem is very persuasive--also skillfully written, creative, and well detailed. I especially like the rhyming at the end.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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During all my years on Fan Story, I've never participated in a class! Your poem is very persuasive--also skillfully written, creative, and well detailed. I especially like the rhyming at the end.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Hello there, sweet Janice. Thanks so much!
Melissa
Comment from Celyn
The rhyming is good in this poem and so is the rhythm - well done. So many poems rhyme but have no rhythm so I am really pleased to read one that accepts the importance of both of these in poetry.
Celyn
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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The rhyming is good in this poem and so is the rhythm - well done. So many poems rhyme but have no rhythm so I am really pleased to read one that accepts the importance of both of these in poetry.
Celyn
Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Hello Ceylon. Thank you for your lovely comments. I have taken poetry classes here on FS before and have gotten so much out of them. I am glad you enjoyed the iambic meter in this verse. Thanks again.
Melissa
Comment from June Sargent
What a great example of how well you have done in this meter class! Plus, this poem is great advertisement for Pantygynt - highlighting hus amazing skills as a poet and a teacher. Loved the entire presentation!
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What a great example of how well you have done in this meter class! Plus, this poem is great advertisement for Pantygynt - highlighting hus amazing skills as a poet and a teacher. Loved the entire presentation!
Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Hello sweet June. Thank you so much. I have gotten a lot out of the classes and hope others might be interested too... I just wanted to get the word out that there is an opportunity with a first class teacher. :) Hugs!
Melissa
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Lovely image and nice presentation, Melissa.
-Your notes and announcement are appreciated.
-You did a good job showcasing the nature of
the class with effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like the opening verse about the "Poet Master" and his home.
-An interesting insight to his technique with
"His passion is creative word
and muttered phrases can be heard."
-An excellent poem that he will appreciate.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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-Lovely image and nice presentation, Melissa.
-Your notes and announcement are appreciated.
-You did a good job showcasing the nature of
the class with effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like the opening verse about the "Poet Master" and his home.
-An interesting insight to his technique with
"His passion is creative word
and muttered phrases can be heard."
-An excellent poem that he will appreciate.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Hello Pam. Thank you so much. I have gotten a lot out of the classes and hope others might be interested too... I just wanted to get the word out that there is an opportunity with a first class teacher. :)
Melissa
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You are welcome, Melissa, and thanks for sharing. You answered my question in your message box!!
Comment from Paul McFarland
That's a good one, Melissa. I don't think that you need to take the class. You also have a nice rhyme scheme in this one. You should get a fee for the promotion.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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That's a good one, Melissa. I don't think that you need to take the class. You also have a nice rhyme scheme in this one. You should get a fee for the promotion.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Hello Paul. Thank you so much. I have gotten a lot out of the classes and hope others might be interested too... I just wanted to get the word out that there is an opportunity with a first class teacher. :)
Melissa
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a lovely rhyming poem in honour of Jim, his flair with words and in particular his knowledge that he shares not only with those in one of his classes. Nicely said.
I particularly enjoyed the scene you set for us in your opening verse.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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This is a lovely rhyming poem in honour of Jim, his flair with words and in particular his knowledge that he shares not only with those in one of his classes. Nicely said.
I particularly enjoyed the scene you set for us in your opening verse.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Hello Pearl. Thank you so much. I have gotten a lot out of the classes and hope others might be interested too... I just wanted to get the word out that there is an opportunity with a first class teacher. :)
Melissa
Comment from lyenochka
Loved your poem to advertise Jim's class! How delightful that you describe him and where he lives and his helpful classes. I was so happy to be in his class with you and Yvonne! You're such a blessing!!
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Loved your poem to advertise Jim's class! How delightful that you describe him and where he lives and his helpful classes. I was so happy to be in his class with you and Yvonne! You're such a blessing!!
Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Hello Helen. Thank you so much. I have gotten a lot out of the classes and hope others might be interested too... I just wanted to get the word out that there is an opportunity with a first class teacher. :)
Melissa
Comment from Wendy G
You have done a wonderful advertisement for his classes with your smooth metre and excellent rhymes. The times of his classes are a bit awkward for me because of the significant time differences, but I am sure that everyone who joins will learn a great deal, as he is an excellent teacher, and a very encouraging one. Well done.
Wendy
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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You have done a wonderful advertisement for his classes with your smooth metre and excellent rhymes. The times of his classes are a bit awkward for me because of the significant time differences, but I am sure that everyone who joins will learn a great deal, as he is an excellent teacher, and a very encouraging one. Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Hello Wendy. Thank you so much. I have gotten a lot out of the classes and hope others might be interested too... I just wanted to get the word out that there is an opportunity with a first class teacher. :)
Melissa
Comment from l.raven
Hi Melissa, for so long I have wanted
to get into classes...but as you know...
I am on the road so much....I wouldn't
be able to come in like I would like to...
it's like my church...I hate missing a Sunday...
but I do when I'm traveling...
I'll be on the road Nov.21st-Jan.4th...will be
going to Florida...I do come in FS at night when my
grandkids go to bed...but I tire fast...
someday I'm going to get a dog...and settle down...
and my traveling days will be over...
you did a wonderful job to get people to
join Jim's class...and I bet some people will...
I love your poem my wonderful sweet friend...
and love your picture...I bet he loves it...
so very nicely written sweet girl...love you...
Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Hi Melissa, for so long I have wanted
to get into classes...but as you know...
I am on the road so much....I wouldn't
be able to come in like I would like to...
it's like my church...I hate missing a Sunday...
but I do when I'm traveling...
I'll be on the road Nov.21st-Jan.4th...will be
going to Florida...I do come in FS at night when my
grandkids go to bed...but I tire fast...
someday I'm going to get a dog...and settle down...
and my traveling days will be over...
you did a wonderful job to get people to
join Jim's class...and I bet some people will...
I love your poem my wonderful sweet friend...
and love your picture...I bet he loves it...
so very nicely written sweet girl...love you...
Linda xxoo
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Hello sweet Linda. Thank you so much. I have gotten a lot out of the classes and hope others might be interested too... I just wanted to get the word out that there is an opportunity with a first class teacher. :)
Melissa
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I think it was a wonderful...caring
idea...and you couldn't have said it any better...
your so welcome my sweet friend...big smiles
back at you...love xxoo
Comment from jake cosmos aller
a fine tribute to a fellow Fan Story writer, teacher and poet extraordinaire. I always learn so much from him and look forward to taking the class as I don't really get meter and formal poetry.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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a fine tribute to a fellow Fan Story writer, teacher and poet extraordinaire. I always learn so much from him and look forward to taking the class as I don't really get meter and formal poetry.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Hello Jake. Thank you so much. I have gotten a lot out of the classes and hope others might be interested too... I just wanted to get the word out that there is an opportunity with a first class teacher. :)
Melissa
