Tanka Collection
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Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
The rules for Tanka seem less strict than for others. Perhaps this explains why it is such a fluid poem. I especially liked the last line:
musing about one-sided love
this gave the depth to the poem forme. Much enjoyed. Kate xx
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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2022
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The rules for Tanka seem less strict than for others. Perhaps this explains why it is such a fluid poem. I especially liked the last line:
musing about one-sided love
this gave the depth to the poem forme. Much enjoyed. Kate xx
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Comment Written 30-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2022
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Thanks has more freedom than haiku.but tanka has to be 31 syllables or less. I love this form. Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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