Novella - Unwanted Dog
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this. I really like this story and you're doing a great job writing it.
Some of them headstrong, obstinate, and rebellious. Others, like me, self-willed, stubborn, and perhaps even a mite recalcitrant. (doesn't this describe most teenage boys. As a mother who raised four boys, I think at any given time it can describe them all. My husband was Army, so I was a geographic single parent most of their teenage years.)
I felt single most so. (single most???)
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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Thank you for sharing this. I really like this story and you're doing a great job writing it.
Some of them headstrong, obstinate, and rebellious. Others, like me, self-willed, stubborn, and perhaps even a mite recalcitrant. (doesn't this describe most teenage boys. As a mother who raised four boys, I think at any given time it can describe them all. My husband was Army, so I was a geographic single parent most of their teenage years.)
I felt single most so. (single most???)
Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
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Comment from BethShelby
I thought Hermitage Hall was an orphanage. Did you get transferred there from where you were originally? It sounds like a terrible place to be. Almost like a prison. I keep hoping you'll get adopted, but now I'm wondering if you have to escape again. I'm immersed in your story and hoping it has a happy ending.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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I thought Hermitage Hall was an orphanage. Did you get transferred there from where you were originally? It sounds like a terrible place to be. Almost like a prison. I keep hoping you'll get adopted, but now I'm wondering if you have to escape again. I'm immersed in your story and hoping it has a happy ending.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
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Comment from country ranch writer
Well looks like things are going to get tougher for the boy because ge git caught running away from Heritage hall. I feel for him.
11/03/2922----5:15 pm
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Well looks like things are going to get tougher for the boy because ge git caught running away from Heritage hall. I feel for him.
11/03/2922----5:15 pm
Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
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Comment from Wendy G
Such hard reading, knowing this is all true. Bullying and mistreatment never gets the desired results, and the sad thing is that they were only interested in power, never the poor boys whose lives were ruined. A powerful and moving piece of writing. Well done.
Wendy
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Such hard reading, knowing this is all true. Bullying and mistreatment never gets the desired results, and the sad thing is that they were only interested in power, never the poor boys whose lives were ruined. A powerful and moving piece of writing. Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
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Comment from Ulla
Well, Brett, here goes my last six and I'm so so glad that I do have to give. You know, these memoirs are the best writing I've seen from you. It's superb.
What an awful place to be. They treated you guys worse than animals. I can't wait to reading what's next. Ulla:)))
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Well, Brett, here goes my last six and I'm so so glad that I do have to give. You know, these memoirs are the best writing I've seen from you. It's superb.
What an awful place to be. They treated you guys worse than animals. I can't wait to reading what's next. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
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Comment from papa55mike
Heavy on the BIG. I went to a high school like that and in the worst part of town. Walking home by myself was always a challenge until I got a car. What a wonderfully written chapter. Best of luck with your book!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Heavy on the BIG. I went to a high school like that and in the worst part of town. Walking home by myself was always a challenge until I got a car. What a wonderfully written chapter. Best of luck with your book!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Comment from royowen
That dreaded moment has arrived, facing the music, as a result of running away from Hermitage Hall, facing the miscreantal Tubbo wouldn't have been easy at any time, but I think there's enough defiant rage in you that would dull the pain of any physical, I do know that side, sadist don't get kicks from silence. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
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That dreaded moment has arrived, facing the music, as a result of running away from Hermitage Hall, facing the miscreantal Tubbo wouldn't have been easy at any time, but I think there's enough defiant rage in you that would dull the pain of any physical, I do know that side, sadist don't get kicks from silence. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
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Well done
Comment from judiverse
It's too bad there weren't alternatives to Hermitage Hall. Today we've got all kinds of inspections and dietary requirements that would have to be met. It was probably incumbent on the boys to make the worst of their bad situation. How much more trouble than the "Unwanted Dog" be in than to be summoned to the Superintendent's office. judi
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It's too bad there weren't alternatives to Hermitage Hall. Today we've got all kinds of inspections and dietary requirements that would have to be met. It was probably incumbent on the boys to make the worst of their bad situation. How much more trouble than the "Unwanted Dog" be in than to be summoned to the Superintendent's office. judi
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Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
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Events looked mighty bleak at that time. Appreciate your comments and the review.
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I'd like to think that those abandoned boys have better options now. Unfortunately, that hadn't happened in your time. Great story. judi
