Tanka Collection
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Comment from prettybluebirds
You write some of the most beautiful poetry that I have ever read. I love the artwork you add to them too. It gives the writings more meaning when there is a lovely picture attached. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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You write some of the most beautiful poetry that I have ever read. I love the artwork you add to them too. It gives the writings more meaning when there is a lovely picture attached. Nicely done.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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Hello, Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Cheers. :)
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Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy....four million waves? That's quite a few. I can see dealing with, say, two, maybe three million, but any bigger amount than that, it's love, shmuve; I'm gone, baby!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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Another fine poem, Gypsy....four million waves? That's quite a few. I can see dealing with, say, two, maybe three million, but any bigger amount than that, it's love, shmuve; I'm gone, baby!
Comment Written 25-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Cheers. :)
Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your Tanka poem- excellent picture presentation- poem has excellent flow - good metaphors- under same moon - nice- precise, each wave appropriately .001 of a mile long, (5ft )or more- depending on where in Australia- lol good job AP
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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I like your Tanka poem- excellent picture presentation- poem has excellent flow - good metaphors- under same moon - nice- precise, each wave appropriately .001 of a mile long, (5ft )or more- depending on where in Australia- lol good job AP
Comment Written 25-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Cheers. :)
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Comment from royowen
What a great creation Gypsy, the thought of how many objects can lie between a person, or persons and their sorrow is incredible, this is beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy,
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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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What a great creation Gypsy, the thought of how many objects can lie between a person, or persons and their sorrow is incredible, this is beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy,
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Comment Written 25-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Cheers. :)
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Most welcome
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was a beautiful poem. I liked the simple style. It was evocative and romantic. Seemingly star crossed lover's. Her tears mixed with the salt of the ocean. Becoming one with the water. I thoroughly enjoyed this. Thank you for posting. Gretchen
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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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This was a beautiful poem. I liked the simple style. It was evocative and romantic. Seemingly star crossed lover's. Her tears mixed with the salt of the ocean. Becoming one with the water. I thoroughly enjoyed this. Thank you for posting. Gretchen
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Comment Written 25-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Cheers. :)
Gypsy hugs
