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Comment from Ulla
Wow, Brett, All I can say is, what a rough and tough start you had to life. But you're a fighter and being left to your own devices will only accentuate that. I talk from experience, although I was never quite left in the same situation that you were.
I still had to fight having been abandoned at birth. I can't wait to reading on. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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Wow, Brett, All I can say is, what a rough and tough start you had to life. But you're a fighter and being left to your own devices will only accentuate that. I talk from experience, although I was never quite left in the same situation that you were.
I still had to fight having been abandoned at birth. I can't wait to reading on. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 25-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from royowen
Until one is old enough to be no ward of the state, I guess that would be 18? Your only crime was that you weren't, although I'm pretty sure you could make in the human jungle. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Typo : Caged lion in a looney (bend) bin?
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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Until one is old enough to be no ward of the state, I guess that would be 18? Your only crime was that you weren't, although I'm pretty sure you could make in the human jungle. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Typo : Caged lion in a looney (bend) bin?
Comment Written 25-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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Appreciate your insights and the review.
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Most welcome
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Prison is not one place I would want to be unless I was a prison minister. I'm going to read back some of your chapters before I comment on this post. Are things better for you since you wrote this story?
The precinct is like a courthouse with jail cells. Being the tramp was there, I am sure the surroundings were where they held prisoners. Prayers for a great future outcome.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Prison is not one place I would want to be unless I was a prison minister. I'm going to read back some of your chapters before I comment on this post. Are things better for you since you wrote this story?
The precinct is like a courthouse with jail cells. Being the tramp was there, I am sure the surroundings were where they held prisoners. Prayers for a great future outcome.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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You probably should read them for a better understanding of what was going on. This is my autobiography. I was in the police station cause I ran away from an orphanage when I was 12. They were in the process of returning me back there.
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I am reading your autobiography; now I understand what has happened also to your dad.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I'm not into violence but because I am into this story, I'm pretty sure I will be reading the next post. I'll probably have to step away and return a few times. Thank you for sharing this post with us. I really enjoyed reading.
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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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I'm not into violence but because I am into this story, I'm pretty sure I will be reading the next post. I'll probably have to step away and return a few times. Thank you for sharing this post with us. I really enjoyed reading.
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Comment Written 25-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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Will let you know that chapter will be intense. Appreciate the review.
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was really, really good. I felt the chest busting anger and anxiety of being caught and knowing your next destination. I love this inner dialogue and the typical youthful macho attitude. Youth is a time where you haven't learned to pick your battles yet. Great job on this continuing chapter. Gretchen
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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This was really, really good. I felt the chest busting anger and anxiety of being caught and knowing your next destination. I love this inner dialogue and the typical youthful macho attitude. Youth is a time where you haven't learned to pick your battles yet. Great job on this continuing chapter. Gretchen
Comment Written 25-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Appreciate the review.
