Black and White?
A contest entry15 total reviews
Comment from BermyBye50
This is an intriguing entry and choice of colors for the My Favorite Color poetry contest. I contrast between darkness and light mirror perfectly the divergent evil and good. which in turn capture the synergy of right and wrong in humanity personified by the image of the wolf. Well done.
All the best in the contest,
Eugene
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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This is an intriguing entry and choice of colors for the My Favorite Color poetry contest. I contrast between darkness and light mirror perfectly the divergent evil and good. which in turn capture the synergy of right and wrong in humanity personified by the image of the wolf. Well done.
All the best in the contest,
Eugene
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much Eugene for reading, reviewing and your fantastic comments.
Comment from eliz100
You have described the opposite poles of color and good and evil. I enjoyed reading your poem, it flows well. The picture goes well with black and white, good and evil, and the wolf mentioned in your poem. I do not see any room for improvement,
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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You have described the opposite poles of color and good and evil. I enjoyed reading your poem, it flows well. The picture goes well with black and white, good and evil, and the wolf mentioned in your poem. I do not see any room for improvement,
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much eliz100 for reading, reviewing and your amazing comments.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Black and White?, tries to find the gray in one's admiration of the polar colors which separate the extremes of day and night, right and wrong, and reflection or absorption.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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This poem, Black and White?, tries to find the gray in one's admiration of the polar colors which separate the extremes of day and night, right and wrong, and reflection or absorption.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much Bill for reading, reviewing and your fantastic comments. You definitely hit this one spot on!
Comment from royowen
You must be referring to Virginia Wolfe, who probably had a propensity to think in black and white, as some do, the shades of grey can be a distraction and confuse, this is beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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You must be referring to Virginia Wolfe, who probably had a propensity to think in black and white, as some do, the shades of grey can be a distraction and confuse, this is beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much Roy for reading, reviewing and your great comments. Blessings.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job with your contest entry, Mystery Author.
You expressed your thoughts and feelings about your two
favorite colors well. I wonder if you will be allowed to continue
since you wrote about two colors. However, I'm not a judge.
The color scheme was perfect for your work.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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You did a good job with your contest entry, Mystery Author.
You expressed your thoughts and feelings about your two
favorite colors well. I wonder if you will be allowed to continue
since you wrote about two colors. However, I'm not a judge.
The color scheme was perfect for your work.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
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Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much Jan your reading, reviewing and your comments were definitely interesting.
