The Tor
Viewing comments for Chapter 52 "Slow the Cadence"Adventures around & upon a hill
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Comment from Ricky1024
This had an interesting list of characters quite impressive and was well written rich in theme and imagery.
It also read well and flowed well with no grammar issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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This had an interesting list of characters quite impressive and was well written rich in theme and imagery.
It also read well and flowed well with no grammar issues.
...
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
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Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Thank you for your substantive review. I'm glad it was pleasurable.
Comment from prettybluebirds
This is an unusual story, but I'm not sure I understand what it is about. It is probably because I haven't read any of the previous chapters. It is skillfully written. I spotted one error. Cordella jumped (into) should be (in to) help. Otherwise it is perfect.
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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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This is an unusual story, but I'm not sure I understand what it is about. It is probably because I haven't read any of the previous chapters. It is skillfully written. I spotted one error. Cordella jumped (into) should be (in to) help. Otherwise it is perfect.
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Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Whoa, thank you for a supportive review.