Magical
Lune poetry40 total reviews
Comment from Lobber
Hello Melissa,
From the artwork, it appears that more than stardust has descended upon our sweet goddess, with not much tine to worry about her eye lash makeup. Seriously though ... Great poem and great artwork.
- Jerry
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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Hello Melissa,
From the artwork, it appears that more than stardust has descended upon our sweet goddess, with not much tine to worry about her eye lash makeup. Seriously though ... Great poem and great artwork.
- Jerry
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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Hi Jer. Thank you very much for your lovely review. I was feeling a bit fanciful and was so lucky to find the image afterwards. I'm so glad you like it! :)
Melissa
Comment from Carol Clark2
I love your lune for the contest! The picture is great and is perfect for your poem. Your syllable count is perfect, and I love the thought of stardust falling on eyelashes. Best wishes in the contest. Have a blessed weekend.
Carol
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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I love your lune for the contest! The picture is great and is perfect for your poem. Your syllable count is perfect, and I love the thought of stardust falling on eyelashes. Best wishes in the contest. Have a blessed weekend.
Carol
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Hello sweet Carol. Thank you so very much for your lovely review!!
Melissa
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You're welcome, my friend. My pleasure.
Comment from GWHARGIS
This had a dreamy and mystical feel to it. I could see a sparkle of dust settling onto long dark lashes. I loved the cozy feel of this. Well done. I thoroughly enjoyed your poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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This had a dreamy and mystical feel to it. I could see a sparkle of dust settling onto long dark lashes. I loved the cozy feel of this. Well done. I thoroughly enjoyed your poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Hello Gretchen. Thank you so much. I was feeling fanciful :)
Melissa
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You did very well. Gretchen
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and well written Lune poem you have penned for the contest. You used great descriptive words and very beautiful imagery. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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This is a very beautiful and well written Lune poem you have penned for the contest. You used great descriptive words and very beautiful imagery. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Hello Teri. Thank you for your lovely review, Teri. I'm delighted that you like it.
Melissa
Comment from royowen
Wouldn't it be wonderful if stardust, instead of giving one red eye, would precipitate great dreams... and you didn't wake up when you got to he good bit! Beautifully written Lune entry Melissa, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Wouldn't it be wonderful if stardust, instead of giving one red eye, would precipitate great dreams... and you didn't wake up when you got to he good bit! Beautifully written Lune entry Melissa, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much, Roy. I was feeling fanciful when I wrote it and was so glad to find the artwork afterwards. Glad you liked it.
Melissa
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Well done Melissa
Comment from Mrs. KT
"Magical," indeed, Meliss!
What a beautiful lune offering both in format and message.
Creative and moving!
I love the thought of "stardust" having the power to bewitch "my dreams!"
Thank you for sharing!
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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"Magical," indeed, Meliss!
What a beautiful lune offering both in format and message.
Creative and moving!
I love the thought of "stardust" having the power to bewitch "my dreams!"
Thank you for sharing!
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Hi Diane. Thank you so much for your wonderful thoughts on this verse. I was lucky to find that art after I wrote it... it seemed magical to me. :). Hugs!!
Melissa
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Just beautiful, Melissa!
We had sleet here yesterday! And I have two huge bags of daffodil bulbs to still plant! Yikes!! :)
Take Care!
diane
Comment from dragonpoet
Maybe it was fairy dust mixed with stardust as part or a love spell. I like the fantastical artwork. The hair that surrounds the bottom of the moon makes be think of Rapunzel.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Maybe it was fairy dust mixed with stardust as part or a love spell. I like the fantastical artwork. The hair that surrounds the bottom of the moon makes be think of Rapunzel.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Hello Joan. Thank you so very much!
Melissa
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Don't mention it, Melissa.
Joan
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Ah, your image is perfect with your words, black and white against a white backdrop and black lettering. It's so romantic to think of stardust on one's lashes and they lie beneath the moon and dream.
Very nice presentation. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Ah, your image is perfect with your words, black and white against a white backdrop and black lettering. It's so romantic to think of stardust on one's lashes and they lie beneath the moon and dream.
Very nice presentation. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much, Pam, for your delightful comments and review. I was lucky to find the artwork after I had written the verse. So glad you like it!!
Melissa
Comment from karenina
It's ethereal and calming. It's imaginative and beautifully presented. It's, in short, exactly what I'd conjure up for my dreams tonight if only the sandman were taking special orders! Very nice Lune... I'd be amazed if this didn't do very well in the contest!
Karenina
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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It's ethereal and calming. It's imaginative and beautifully presented. It's, in short, exactly what I'd conjure up for my dreams tonight if only the sandman were taking special orders! Very nice Lune... I'd be amazed if this didn't do very well in the contest!
Karenina
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Hello, sweet Karenina. Thank you dear lady for your lovely words. I am delighted you liked it and I wish you sweet dreams tonight!!!
Melissa
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Here's hoping! I'll tell the sandman you put in a good word for me!
:)
Comment from Liz Westfall
This was definitely magical! The picture is perfect for the poem. I love the ambiance and energy of it. I also love the stardust falling on your lashes bit. It's so tangible and visual.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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This was definitely magical! The picture is perfect for the poem. I love the ambiance and energy of it. I also love the stardust falling on your lashes bit. It's so tangible and visual.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much, Liz, for your delightful comments and review. I was lucky to find the artwork after I had written the verse. So glad you like it!!
Melissa