Novella - Unwanted Dog
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Comment from Sankey
Well done! I was not sure if we were continuing from the last chapter but it eventually appeared we were carrying on from the last. Very descriptive and I could imagine it all, vividly.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Well done! I was not sure if we were continuing from the last chapter but it eventually appeared we were carrying on from the last. Very descriptive and I could imagine it all, vividly.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Appreciate the review. Hopefully will have the next chapter up in a couple days. Be looking for it.
Comment from country ranch writer
He best find a place to hide for sure hi goose will be cooked. Poor old lady bless her soul was still probably in shock a spunky kid tried to roll her for her buggy for a chance to escape.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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He best find a place to hide for sure hi goose will be cooked. Poor old lady bless her soul was still probably in shock a spunky kid tried to roll her for her buggy for a chance to escape.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Appreciate the review.
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Hugs
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Smiles welcome
Comment from Ulla
It's an amazing tale, Brett, and a tale that so happened to be a true one. You lived through it, after all. I just can't wait to reading on. All best, Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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It's an amazing tale, Brett, and a tale that so happened to be a true one. You lived through it, after all. I just can't wait to reading on. All best, Ulla:)))
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Much more to come so stay tuned. Appreciate the review.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
So far, this young lad has escaped, but still not free. I see I have to wait until the next post to see if freedom is in his cards. I am really enjoying reading this. You are doing a great job writing it. Thank you for sharing it with us.
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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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So far, this young lad has escaped, but still not free. I see I have to wait until the next post to see if freedom is in his cards. I am really enjoying reading this. You are doing a great job writing it. Thank you for sharing it with us.
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Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Appreciate your insightful comments and the review.
Comment from royowen
I think survival on the streets needs to have a pretty cunning and quick witted mind and an ability to be able to survive, but things won't always go one's way 100% of the time, but generally speaking one would survive if one assumes not everyone is on one's side, well done Brett, good write, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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I think survival on the streets needs to have a pretty cunning and quick witted mind and an ability to be able to survive, but things won't always go one's way 100% of the time, but generally speaking one would survive if one assumes not everyone is on one's side, well done Brett, good write, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
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Most welcome
