Would you reject your child?
A poem36 total reviews
Comment from karenina
What a stunning point of view! Of course we can all relate to not wanting to disappoint our father, and as parents, we know how much we love our children, despite things they may do wrong.
Do we not know, then, that God, our Heavenly Father, will never forsake us?
Karenina
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022
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What a stunning point of view! Of course we can all relate to not wanting to disappoint our father, and as parents, we know how much we love our children, despite things they may do wrong.
Do we not know, then, that God, our Heavenly Father, will never forsake us?
Karenina
Comment Written 13-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022
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Thanks Karen, for these beautiful comments and a sage review, blessings Roy
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Sage review! I wish I'd ever reach "sage" level! Very generous of you!
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Don't doubt it
Comment from MissMerri
Such a sad, heartbreaking picture! I thought the poem was much more happy and optimistic, and carried a good message too. God does not reject His children! We can be sure of that. Your rhymes were excellent and the meter totally musical. A nice poem to read and one full of things to make us think. Excellent! MM
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022
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Such a sad, heartbreaking picture! I thought the poem was much more happy and optimistic, and carried a good message too. God does not reject His children! We can be sure of that. Your rhymes were excellent and the meter totally musical. A nice poem to read and one full of things to make us think. Excellent! MM
Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022
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Thanks Adonna, for these beautiful comments and a sage review, blessings Roy
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your post. I think that Jesus Christ is always with us of our good and bad times. Exceptional work! No mistakes found. I like it. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022
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I have enjoyed reading your post. I think that Jesus Christ is always with us of our good and bad times. Exceptional work! No mistakes found. I like it. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022
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Thanks Raul, for these beautiful comments and a sage review, blessings Roy
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Here we live at a time where we reject the stranger and separate mother from child, yet many of us say we live according to His teachings. We want to be known as a welcoming nation, but only for certain people. We want to protect the unborn, but they are not our problem when they arrive. We abandon many to poverty and abuse.
Your powerful and deeply reverent words are a reminder:
"One's house should be a refuse strong."
Best wishes and many blessings to you for reminding so many the true meaning of Chrisianity.
Mary
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022
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Here we live at a time where we reject the stranger and separate mother from child, yet many of us say we live according to His teachings. We want to be known as a welcoming nation, but only for certain people. We want to protect the unborn, but they are not our problem when they arrive. We abandon many to poverty and abuse.
Your powerful and deeply reverent words are a reminder:
"One's house should be a refuse strong."
Best wishes and many blessings to you for reminding so many the true meaning of Chrisianity.
Mary
Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022
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Thanks Mary, for these beautiful comments and a sage review, blessings Roy
Comment from Douglas Goff
This was very nice. I like that you backed up your words with scripture.
This is a poignant capitulating piece of work.
Well done! Keep it up!
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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This was very nice. I like that you backed up your words with scripture.
This is a poignant capitulating piece of work.
Well done! Keep it up!
Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much Douglas, for these terrific comments and a great review, blessings Roy
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I liked it!
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Bless you
Comment from Thomas Blanks
"Nothing causes more consternation in a group of hypocrites than one honest man." - Albert Einstein
So many "Christians," say that the only way to get to heaven is to accept Jesus as their personal savior and that good works will not get anyone into heaven. If they had TRULY accepted Jesus as their savior, they would gladly do the good works that they say are not required.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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"Nothing causes more consternation in a group of hypocrites than one honest man." - Albert Einstein
So many "Christians," say that the only way to get to heaven is to accept Jesus as their personal savior and that good works will not get anyone into heaven. If they had TRULY accepted Jesus as their savior, they would gladly do the good works that they say are not required.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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You?re right, that?s what James says, faith produces good works, but good works won?t save you, grace through faith. (Ephesians 2:8-9) but it is a little more complex than that, the truth is only God and the person truly know.. The flesh is powerful Thomas. Thank you so much my friend, blessings Roy
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your skillfully written, deeply reverent poem conveys a powerful message about how undeserving we are of God's unique love. The only good in us is Jesus.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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Your skillfully written, deeply reverent poem conveys a powerful message about how undeserving we are of God's unique love. The only good in us is Jesus.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much Janice, for these terrific comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from godlucifer
for the lord is our savior. he is our mighty creator. what he create we dwell on,what he create we create our image,and the creator is our mighty ruler. your poem was well thought out and well planned. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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for the lord is our savior. he is our mighty creator. what he create we dwell on,what he create we create our image,and the creator is our mighty ruler. your poem was well thought out and well planned. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much for these terrific comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Would You Reject Your Child?, speaks to the grace and mercy of an all-powerful God Who has saved those who sought His face and believed His promise. Nice poem.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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This poem, Would You Reject Your Child?, speaks to the grace and mercy of an all-powerful God Who has saved those who sought His face and believed His promise. Nice poem.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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Thanks Bill, for these marvellous comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from scongrove
Wonderful poem, my friend :) And very heartfelt. I can feel the emotions in your writing.
My favorite:
For Jesus said, I'll never leave,
I'll not forsake, your soul won't grieve
Though children stumble as they walk,
God's hand protects, though shadows stalk.
Always your fan,
Shana :)
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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Wonderful poem, my friend :) And very heartfelt. I can feel the emotions in your writing.
My favorite:
For Jesus said, I'll never leave,
I'll not forsake, your soul won't grieve
Though children stumble as they walk,
God's hand protects, though shadows stalk.
Always your fan,
Shana :)
Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much dear Shana,