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Hide me in your shadow

A poem

35 total reviews 
Comment from aryr
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What an inspirational picture of the heavenly angel, Roy. Your words were beyond inspirational because they showed that God and His Son, Christ were forgiving of our sins. Blessings n Hugs!

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
    Thanks Alie, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy stirring
Comment from Brandon Clark
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Another great poem that shares your deep faith and inspires others who may or may not be religious but can still feel and carry these words with them. Excellent!

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
    Thanks Brandon, for these marvellous comments and a stirring review, blessings Roy stirring
Comment from estory
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The failings of man stand in stark contrast to the perfect love and redemption of Christ in this poem. We can't always forgive, we can't always rise above our anger and fear and pain, but Christ always wipes our tears away, time and time again. estory

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
    Thanks dear friend, for these marvellous comments and a stirring review, blessings Roy stirring
Comment from Liz Westfall
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Another beautifully written poem, Roy! Your pieces are always so deep and thoughtful. Although I don't find myself to be very religious, I appreciate the messages you share.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
    Thanks Liz, for these marvellous comments and a stirring review, blessings Roy stirring
Comment from Ulla
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Roy, this is so beautifully written. For that it deserves a six I no longer have. Your imagery and descriptive words are really wonderful. You know full well where I stand but, I can't but enjoy your poem. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
    Thanks Ulla, for these marvellous comments and a stirring review, blessings Roy stirring
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Your poem had an excellent message, Roy. No matter what
man does, God is there if s/he is a true believer. I used 'man'
to mean all individuals. Your presentation was great--the color
scheme was perfect as was the image. I liked the monorhymes
within each verse. Your words had smooth flow and created great
imagery.
Thanks for sharing, Jan

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
    Thanks Jan, for these marvellous comments and a stirring review, blessings Roy stirring
Comment from dragonpoet
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These mono-rhyme stanzas show how sin casts a shadow over the sinner and the one sinned against. It als reminds how and why forgiveness is available.
Well done.
Joan

P S Happy Birthday Roy.


 Comment Written 10-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
    Thanks for the birthday wishes, and for these marvellous comments and a stirring review, blessings Roy stirring
reply by dragonpoet on 11-Oct-2022
    Don't mention it, Roy.
    Joan
Comment from nomi338
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So few take note of the sacrifice, killing him again and again, by their refusal to let go of actions, beliefs and lifestyles that dishonor him and the things that he stands for. Chief among them is love. How often do we witness acts spurred by pure hatred of people who have done nothing to deserve it. Your words and phrase are beautiful. Inspiring and uplifting.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
    Thanks Nomi, for these marvellous comments and a stirring review, blessings Roy stirring
Comment from Teri7
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Roy, This is a very precious and very well written spiritual poem you have penned. You used great descriptive words and very good scripture. May God bless you on this special day of yours! Blessigs,teri

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
    Thanks Teri, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy stirring
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Relationships are hard, as is our relationship with God. It's not hard on His part, but on our part. We like to make it more difficult than necessary, but God understands. Thank you for sharing with us.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
    Thanks Barbara, for these marvellous comments and a stirring review, blessings Roy stirring