Daydreams from the Ashes
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Comment from GWHARGIS
What a bittersweet poem. The sad thought of taking care of someone with dementia is heart wrenching. To be a stranger to the ones you love is like having to watch them die day after day. This was full of the day to day motions of taking care of something that won't change. Beautiful and heart breaking. Gretchen
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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2022
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What a bittersweet poem. The sad thought of taking care of someone with dementia is heart wrenching. To be a stranger to the ones you love is like having to watch them die day after day. This was full of the day to day motions of taking care of something that won't change. Beautiful and heart breaking. Gretchen
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Comment Written 08-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I may have cried a lot during and after writing it, so I appreciate that some of that came through. Thank you for your time and your kindness. I hope you have a wonderful day.
Comment from jessizero
This is love, true, strong, and pure. I admire your poem, and it moved me very much. Thank you so much for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
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This is love, true, strong, and pure. I admire your poem, and it moved me very much. Thank you so much for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
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Comment Written 08-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much for reading it and reviewing. I really appreciate your time and your kindness. I hope you have a wonderful day.