One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Gypsy,
I like your using fall as a backdrop for your poem. Autumn reminds me of a desolate season l, and maybe you put 'missing you' for that reason.
Very nice work,
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Gypsy,
I like your using fall as a backdrop for your poem. Autumn reminds me of a desolate season l, and maybe you put 'missing you' for that reason.
Very nice work,
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 28-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Virtual six on this one, but no more left in my pocket. The last line is brilliant and penetrates into the images that come before it. So well done. Hope all is well.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2022
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Virtual six on this one, but no more left in my pocket. The last line is brilliant and penetrates into the images that come before it. So well done. Hope all is well.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2022
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Theodore, thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from karenina
I can imagine standing and looking at this scene, my heart full of sorrow and loss... Perhaps a spouse? A child? A friend? The beauty of your poem is it could be any grief... We can each imagine our own moment thinking this very thing. Beautifully done!
Karenina
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2022
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I can imagine standing and looking at this scene, my heart full of sorrow and loss... Perhaps a spouse? A child? A friend? The beauty of your poem is it could be any grief... We can each imagine our own moment thinking this very thing. Beautifully done!
Karenina
Comment Written 28-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2022
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Yes! That's the beauty of haiku, it's open to interpretation. Karenina, Thank you very much for your time and kind review.
Gypsy hugs
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Always enjoy your posts!
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
This would be difficult to visit the "same creek" as "we" used to visit. Then let the dusk settle in around me. Just the thought makes me melancholy and I have not even lost the one I love yet.
Very nicely worded
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2022
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This would be difficult to visit the "same creek" as "we" used to visit. Then let the dusk settle in around me. Just the thought makes me melancholy and I have not even lost the one I love yet.
Very nicely worded
Comment Written 28-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2022
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Lucky you, Gary, hold on to the one you love, such precious thing, thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from Jasmine Girl
It's a sad poem and solemn poem. You or someone is missing a loved one. The creek reminded her of her/him. I wonder what would happen if it is a sunny day.
Well done.
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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2022
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It's a sad poem and solemn poem. You or someone is missing a loved one. The creek reminded her of her/him. I wonder what would happen if it is a sunny day.
Well done.
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Comment Written 28-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and exceptional review, Lisa.
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Your image and poem are so wonderful to read. Evidently, some romantic event occurred so you returned to this place again in reality. Best of luck with your entry in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2022
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Your image and poem are so wonderful to read. Evidently, some romantic event occurred so you returned to this place again in reality. Best of luck with your entry in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and exceptional review, Rosemary.
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Comment from royowen
I like the way this cute thematic poem is heading, it sort of pulls in opposite directions. There's the order of the first line, and followed neatly btpynthe second, and then the third unravels that order. Well done Gypsy, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2022
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I like the way this cute thematic poem is heading, it sort of pulls in opposite directions. There's the order of the first line, and followed neatly btpynthe second, and then the third unravels that order. Well done Gypsy, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 28-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and exceptional review, Roy. Blessings to you too.
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Well done