A Shot At Love
will a Tweet serve as Cupid's arrow?16 total reviews
Comment from prettybluebirds
You have done an excellent job with the writing prompt. The poem is nicely executed and fun read. The artwork is perfect for the subject of the writing. I wish you worlds of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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You have done an excellent job with the writing prompt. The poem is nicely executed and fun read. The artwork is perfect for the subject of the writing. I wish you worlds of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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I got one vote;where were you when I needed you? Just kidding, only participants could vote. Thanks for reviewing!
Comment from T B Botts
Well done author! You've written a great poem, telling a story that is certainly believable and you used the words necessary to tell it. What a great talent you have. Good luck in the contest.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Well done author! You've written a great poem, telling a story that is certainly believable and you used the words necessary to tell it. What a great talent you have. Good luck in the contest.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 26-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Thanks Tom! Your review is better than my poem deserves, but I'll take it. :) Dennis
Comment from lancellot
If this were real. I would give the guy credit for being bold. He is lying, but what guy wouldn't when chasing a pretty young thang. Love? Ha, that not what he's feeling.
Good work.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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If this were real. I would give the guy credit for being bold. He is lying, but what guy wouldn't when chasing a pretty young thang. Love? Ha, that not what he's feeling.
Good work.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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See how jaded your own indulgences have made you? There are relationships which are fulfilling on all levels of love, even as God has intended.
Comment from dellsworthpoet
A poem with an interesting pov and delivery. It is interesting to find a short prose intro. Mostly intro lines are more lengthy. The poem flows well. The images are clear and fit well with the picture. The narrative stays on point. The conclusion is open ended which works well.
Thanks for a good read.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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A poem with an interesting pov and delivery. It is interesting to find a short prose intro. Mostly intro lines are more lengthy. The poem flows well. The images are clear and fit well with the picture. The narrative stays on point. The conclusion is open ended which works well.
Thanks for a good read.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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I think your review is better than my poem deserves. Thanks, Dennis
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You are welcome.
Comment from jessizero
This was a creative take on a poem using the words provided! I enjoyed reading your post. I know it's not a true story, but I find myself hoping things will work out. :)
Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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This was a creative take on a poem using the words provided! I enjoyed reading your post. I know it's not a true story, but I find myself hoping things will work out. :)
Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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Comment Written 24-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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You made me smile, you romantic you, hoping it will work out for these fictional characters. :) Thanks for reviewing, Dennis
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I guess I am a romantic. It?s funny, though, because everyone knows I have given up on love. :)
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Not entirely, apparently. :)
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a lovely little poem written, using the words provided. I wonder if their seemingly concentrated look does stray to pretty girls when on duty. Good luck in the contest. Cheers
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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
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This is a lovely little poem written, using the words provided. I wonder if their seemingly concentrated look does stray to pretty girls when on duty. Good luck in the contest. Cheers
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Comment Written 24-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
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"I wonder if their seemingly concentrated look does stray to pretty girls when on duty." They remain men and marching back and forth for hours probably does not hold their attention in the same way getting shot at in a war would. Thanks for reviewing!
