His Faith
A contest entry14 total reviews
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
This is a very nice tribute to a good man. I cannot think of a writer with those initials, but I think I would probably admire him if I knew him. People who write truth are admirable.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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This is a very nice tribute to a good man. I cannot think of a writer with those initials, but I think I would probably admire him if I knew him. People who write truth are admirable.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much Verna for reading, reviewing and your wise comments.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
I think that one of the best things about this writing site is the fact that we are in close 'quarters' with such a wide variety of different writers - in every genre and every skill range. I can't think of a better way to grow as a writer!
I wonder if your writer's real name might be Steve? *smile* Either way, i sure hope you make sure (or have someone else do it) that your special honoree gets to see this and understand that he's being celebrated so wonderfully!
A small note, if I may:
--> That('s) the only clue I will give!
Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Dear Mystery Writer,
I think that one of the best things about this writing site is the fact that we are in close 'quarters' with such a wide variety of different writers - in every genre and every skill range. I can't think of a better way to grow as a writer!
I wonder if your writer's real name might be Steve? *smile* Either way, i sure hope you make sure (or have someone else do it) that your special honoree gets to see this and understand that he's being celebrated so wonderfully!
A small note, if I may:
--> That('s) the only clue I will give!
Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much Robyn for reading, reviewing and your great comments. Nope it's not Steve, lol. I will fix that in a moment.
Comment from BermyBye50
This is an excellent poem full of intrigue. its an great entry for the Write a Poem about Someone on FS. I can only wonder who this mystery FS member is. Well done.
All the best in the contest,
Eugene
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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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This is an excellent poem full of intrigue. its an great entry for the Write a Poem about Someone on FS. I can only wonder who this mystery FS member is. Well done.
All the best in the contest,
Eugene
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Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much BermyBye50 for reading, reviewing and your great comments.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a clearly written poem for a FS writer. The clues are presented well, except the last three lines where you give the initials. } His initials are 'pw', Can you guess? That the only clue I will give! Those lines could be developed better. They seem to step away from the poetic feel into just a regular statement. Also, the "That" should be the contraction "That's".
The font size needs to be larger. The first line of the poem could be dropped down one notch. It's too close to the bottom of the visual. I don't understand how the visual fits the poem. With a little tweaking this could be better. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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This is a clearly written poem for a FS writer. The clues are presented well, except the last three lines where you give the initials. } His initials are 'pw', Can you guess? That the only clue I will give! Those lines could be developed better. They seem to step away from the poetic feel into just a regular statement. Also, the "That" should be the contraction "That's".
The font size needs to be larger. The first line of the poem could be dropped down one notch. It's too close to the bottom of the visual. I don't understand how the visual fits the poem. With a little tweaking this could be better. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much Sandra for reading, reviewing and you fantastic comments.
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You are welcome.