Comment from lancellot

Excellent

You have a very interesting chapter. I would change the font size or style on the preview and intro parts. Also, you may want to look over your tags. Overall very nice work.

notes:

Although, we aren't even sure if the path is still {there After} all, it has been five centuries since it was was used to transport the monks to the gallows."

-there. After all

I would someday find it coming in{handy." Somara} enlightened the others.

-handy," Somara

Somara {continued. "There} are many theories about why there was such an unusual terracing around this giant hill {they call a tor.}

-Somara continued, "There
- the call a tor."

Cyndy added more {question. "Yet,} the path

-question, "Yet,

"This place is very {old." Mary Jo} concluded

-old," Mary Jo

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 Comment Written 20-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022

Thank you for your supportive observant review. I've made note of these observations.