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Comment from Jasmine Girl
Haha. Transition from talking about "Stockholm Syndrome" to Harp playing is very smooth. I like they are imagining interesting things and sometimes random because that's how friends talk in a group unless it's a writing group discussion.
Well done.
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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2022
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Haha. Transition from talking about "Stockholm Syndrome" to Harp playing is very smooth. I like they are imagining interesting things and sometimes random because that's how friends talk in a group unless it's a writing group discussion.
Well done.
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Comment Written 16-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your appreciative review. It's good to know you get it.
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Thanks and I did get it. I still need to read it from the start. I guess I'm talented. Have a good day.
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lol you are talented. & you know there is no need for reviews, just enjoy.
Comment from Mabaker12
Your style of writing has changed for the better, Liz. You are putting a lot of effort into preparation, and your insight into the past events bleak as they were is really great reading. Your use of compelling language tells the story perfectly. Good job! Love and hugs Anne
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2022
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Your style of writing has changed for the better, Liz. You are putting a lot of effort into preparation, and your insight into the past events bleak as they were is really great reading. Your use of compelling language tells the story perfectly. Good job! Love and hugs Anne
Comment Written 16-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your loyal appreciative review. I'm glad you see my growth.
Comment from lyenochka
That is a good question - how did their harp-playing memory follow them into that vortex? I am glad that Karin could explain the Stockholm Syndrome and that the ladies could review their experiences together. I feel like a fly on the wall listening in.
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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2022
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That is a good question - how did their harp-playing memory follow them into that vortex? I am glad that Karin could explain the Stockholm Syndrome and that the ladies could review their experiences together. I feel like a fly on the wall listening in.
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Comment Written 16-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your delightful review. I'm glad you are experiencing the eaves-dropping opportunity.