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Comment from barbara.wilkey
This post is very well written, but I can't see any father being proud of his barely teenage age son having sex. If he still needed a babysitter, he shouldn't be having sex. Sorry, don't buy it.
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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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This post is very well written, but I can't see any father being proud of his barely teenage age son having sex. If he still needed a babysitter, he shouldn't be having sex. Sorry, don't buy it.
Mr. Howard Flipped on the living room lights. (lower case 'f' on 'flipped')
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Comment Written 18-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Huh? They didn't have sex. No one said that or showed that.
Thank you very much. I will add a note in case people rad that into the story.
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Sure sounded like it to me.