The Tor
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That "cup" issue sure was a big deal to Abbot Richard who seemed to relish self-inflicted group punishment. The cup "issue" also seems a control issue. Well-written and free of grammatical and spelling errors.
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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
That "cup" issue sure was a big deal to Abbot Richard who seemed to relish self-inflicted group punishment. The cup "issue" also seems a control issue. Well-written and free of grammatical and spelling errors.
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Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Thank you for this wonderful review.
Thank you for your interested review. It is difficult coming in cold. If you are interested, it is about a real trip to England but tweaked to go 'Twilight Zone ish' The first 18 chapters are about the power spots we visited, along with a crop circle. All with discussion about the Michael & Mary ley lines. This was building up to an idea of a sense we'd gotten, that we'd been there before. There were some pretty horrible things that happened. So I decided to write about them. You are welcome to scan through my portfolio to read any chapters leading up to this chapter. You could begin on chapter 16 to get into it. No need for a review, just enjoy.
I am showing people how difficult the monk and Sisters' lives were. I lived this life for 3 years. Then things finally relaxed for the Sisters anyway. Things were much slower for the monks. In the 60's the ones in Vermont were nearly starving, with no recreation or fun.
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I hope life is much more fulfilling for you at this point.
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Very much so. Things settled down for everyone in about 1968. I just feel badly for those who rathern than having that life for only 3 years, but more like 30.