Was it Murder?
A strange case in the retirement villiage.30 total reviews
Comment from Shirley McLain
Oops, those two old ladies are about to let the cat out of the bag. They covered their trail very well and I think it's murder by sex, but what do I know? You did a great job. Shirley
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Oops, those two old ladies are about to let the cat out of the bag. They covered their trail very well and I think it's murder by sex, but what do I know? You did a great job. Shirley
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Thank you for the six stars! You know more than you think. Terry.
Comment from John Ciarmello
Ha! Terry, this was clever, imaginative, and well-written. I didn't stop reading once. The fact that they were toasting their new book at the end was spectacular and raised many new questions that may be revealed to authorities in their book! Great write, my friend.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Ha! Terry, this was clever, imaginative, and well-written. I didn't stop reading once. The fact that they were toasting their new book at the end was spectacular and raised many new questions that may be revealed to authorities in their book! Great write, my friend.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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John, thank you! Terry.
Comment from royowen
How interesting, I know folk have died during the very act of sex, that it was too much for the person involved, the sexual drive must be the strongest instinct we possess, how did they do it? Such an interesting way to commit a crime, beautifully written Terry, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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How interesting, I know folk have died during the very act of sex, that it was too much for the person involved, the sexual drive must be the strongest instinct we possess, how did they do it? Such an interesting way to commit a crime, beautifully written Terry, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Roy Thank you! Terry
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welcome
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Clever story. Nicely written. Good work.
I see no murder, myself. A bit mean, maybe, depending on the women's tactics (rough sex, won't let him catch his breath, and the like.)
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Clever story. Nicely written. Good work.
I see no murder, myself. A bit mean, maybe, depending on the women's tactics (rough sex, won't let him catch his breath, and the like.)
Best wishes.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Thank you for reading. Terry.
Comment from LJbutterfly
This well written Mystery and Crime Fiction piece is succinct, fast moving, and humorous, with believable twists and turns. The dialogue is authentic and all questions and possibilities are considered during the meeting. The newspapers may not carry the story, but a book deal was a great creative ending.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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This well written Mystery and Crime Fiction piece is succinct, fast moving, and humorous, with believable twists and turns. The dialogue is authentic and all questions and possibilities are considered during the meeting. The newspapers may not carry the story, but a book deal was a great creative ending.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for reading. Terry.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
A monthly pool to bet on which resident would die next! Remind me not to live in any retirement villages in Collin County, lol!!
These old gals have it all figured out, don't they? Sub-title for their book could be "Sending them out with a smile."
Fun read, Terry. This could be a continuing series, don't ya think?
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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A monthly pool to bet on which resident would die next! Remind me not to live in any retirement villages in Collin County, lol!!
These old gals have it all figured out, don't they? Sub-title for their book could be "Sending them out with a smile."
Fun read, Terry. This could be a continuing series, don't ya think?
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Pam, thank you for reading. Terry.
Comment from GWHARGIS
You have a twisted sense of humor. And I'm living it. Old men, viagra, sex with energetic young well younger women. What could go wrong. I'm waiting to find out if this was premeditated. The murders not the sex. Is this it or is their more.
One question. When the ladies were toasting. Did you mean to say their soon to be published or our soon to be published? Just wondering. Great read.
Gretchen
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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You have a twisted sense of humor. And I'm living it. Old men, viagra, sex with energetic young well younger women. What could go wrong. I'm waiting to find out if this was premeditated. The murders not the sex. Is this it or is their more.
One question. When the ladies were toasting. Did you mean to say their soon to be published or our soon to be published? Just wondering. Great read.
Gretchen
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Gretchen, I am not publishing a novel. Thank you for reading. Terry.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your story was well thought out, Terry. You gave readers
much to think about. Your characters were well-defined.
I believe the two women are in cahoots with the doctor.
They have a system for winning based on how/who they
decide to do in. I believe the doctor supplied more than
the little blue pill. He gave them something to add to a
drink/coffee etc. that the men would have AFTER one
of the women added the substance to it. That substance
caused a heart attack which would seem natural since the
added stuff would be undetectable.
Best wishes with your publishing endeavors, Jan
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Your story was well thought out, Terry. You gave readers
much to think about. Your characters were well-defined.
I believe the two women are in cahoots with the doctor.
They have a system for winning based on how/who they
decide to do in. I believe the doctor supplied more than
the little blue pill. He gave them something to add to a
drink/coffee etc. that the men would have AFTER one
of the women added the substance to it. That substance
caused a heart attack which would seem natural since the
added stuff would be undetectable.
Best wishes with your publishing endeavors, Jan
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Jan, you have a devious mind, LOL, thank you for reading. Terry.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I couldn't help but smile. I guess being published as a romance novel isn't in the news. This post was fun to read. Like I said, I couldn't help but smile, but felt a little guilty. These poor men died.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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I couldn't help but smile. I guess being published as a romance novel isn't in the news. This post was fun to read. Like I said, I couldn't help but smile, but felt a little guilty. These poor men died.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Barbara, thank you for reading, you are not guilty. Terry
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Well, most men I know would happily say, 'What a great way to go!' At their age, to be seduced would be wonderful. Who loses? No one. Who wins? They all do. I love the ending, I'm guessing this is all down to research?!! Lol. Brilliant. Well done. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Well, most men I know would happily say, 'What a great way to go!' At their age, to be seduced would be wonderful. Who loses? No one. Who wins? They all do. I love the ending, I'm guessing this is all down to research?!! Lol. Brilliant. Well done. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much! Terry.
