Random Rhyme and Petty Prose
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "Cy and I"a collection of phenomenally mundane work.
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I have some catching up to do, Bill. I hope I not to late to vote for Ned? I'll have to check. This one is hilarious! It would have made an excellent contest entry. One eye, the window to the soul. You only need the one, don't you? I love how you start this, you know the guy, lol! Where do you live? Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2022
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I have some catching up to do, Bill. I hope I not to late to vote for Ned? I'll have to check. This one is hilarious! It would have made an excellent contest entry. One eye, the window to the soul. You only need the one, don't you? I love how you start this, you know the guy, lol! Where do you live? Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
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Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2022
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Thank you, Sandra
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
The poem is perfectly understandable. Obviously, the character has only one window to his soul. I'm just not certain how a picture and very good Haiku can equal a chapter. Seems as if this would be a very short book.
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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2022
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The poem is perfectly understandable. Obviously, the character has only one window to his soul. I'm just not certain how a picture and very good Haiku can equal a chapter. Seems as if this would be a very short book.
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Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2022
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A far as I know, this is the only way to link works together on Fanstory.
