Living in the Moment
A rime couee for the Potlatch Club13 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
I like the theme of your Rime Couee and think your amazing day and night that you portray in this verse sounds perfect... even to a cat named Ginger.. such a wonderful name for a cat. :). I enjoyed reading it, June.
Melissa
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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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I like the theme of your Rime Couee and think your amazing day and night that you portray in this verse sounds perfect... even to a cat named Ginger.. such a wonderful name for a cat. :). I enjoyed reading it, June.
Melissa
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Comment Written 26-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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I'm glad you enjoyed this rime couee. It was a form I was not familiar with and I enjoyed the challenge. Just trying to live in the moment and embrace new things each day that come my way...thanks for dropping by!
Comment from RodG
This rime couee is a form I was unfamiliar with. I commend your handling of the challenging six-line stanzas and rhyme pattern. More worthy of applause is your delightful tale of the Speaker and her dog Ginger which has a light-hearted tone.
You made it ALL seem simple to do--thus earning six stars.
Rod
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2022
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This rime couee is a form I was unfamiliar with. I commend your handling of the challenging six-line stanzas and rhyme pattern. More worthy of applause is your delightful tale of the Speaker and her dog Ginger which has a light-hearted tone.
You made it ALL seem simple to do--thus earning six stars.
Rod
Comment Written 26-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2022
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Thank you for dropping by to read and share your thoughts! I was not familiar with this format either - but enjoyed the challenge. It flowed naturally after I started. So glad you liked it - and I do appreciare the generous stars!
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Great job, June.
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, after our wonderful dreams it is great to wake up smiling and looking forward to what the day may bring, an excellent poem for the challenge, very well written****kahpot
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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2022
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Excellent, after our wonderful dreams it is great to wake up smiling and looking forward to what the day may bring, an excellent poem for the challenge, very well written****kahpot
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Comment Written 26-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2022
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It was a fun one for me - glad you enjoyed it! I need to learn to live in the moment and embrace the day, come what may.