One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written poem. An amazing vibrant presentation. Very well put together. I love your photo of the chair. Old but elegant. Absolutely Love this.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2022
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This is a nicely written poem. An amazing vibrant presentation. Very well put together. I love your photo of the chair. Old but elegant. Absolutely Love this.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2022
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Joanne,
Thank you very much!
Comment from royowen
You have certainly mastered the art of the ambiguous abstract style thst suits the art of short form Gypsy, you show the way so well in these styles, you have been a great teacher by your example, thank you, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2022
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You have certainly mastered the art of the ambiguous abstract style thst suits the art of short form Gypsy, you show the way so well in these styles, you have been a great teacher by your example, thank you, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 26-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2022
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Roy,
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and encouraging feedback. It means a lot coming from you.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". --Novalis
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Bless you Gypsy
Comment from Thomas Blanks
A haiku that fits
with its photo perfectly.
Which of them came first?
If I had to guess, it would be that you found the photo and then wrote the poem about what you saw in the photo. If, however, it was done the other way around, and you found the photo after writing the haiku, well done. Or the third option is that you took the photo yourself? Regards.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2022
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A haiku that fits
with its photo perfectly.
Which of them came first?
If I had to guess, it would be that you found the photo and then wrote the poem about what you saw in the photo. If, however, it was done the other way around, and you found the photo after writing the haiku, well done. Or the third option is that you took the photo yourself? Regards.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2022
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Hello, Thomas,
The poem came first and after I Google search pictures until I find the right picture, but I also do it the other way around. It depends how my muse works.
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". --Novalis
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
I remember those wicker seat chairs. Sitting so slowly and carefully as we wondered if it would support our weight. So fragile yet sturdy. They surprised us all.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2022
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I remember those wicker seat chairs. Sitting so slowly and carefully as we wondered if it would support our weight. So fragile yet sturdy. They surprised us all.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much. You are always so kind and honest, I really appreciate it. Your feedback is welcomed.
Gypsy
"The poet waits to paint the unsaid." ?Atticus
Comment from lyenochka
Love the "weight of summer!" With all the heat and sweat and the summer gardening labors, we do feel extra heavy and that poor chair bears the brunt of it! Wonderfully expressed!
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2022
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Love the "weight of summer!" With all the heat and sweat and the summer gardening labors, we do feel extra heavy and that poor chair bears the brunt of it! Wonderfully expressed!
Comment Written 25-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2022
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Thank you, Helen. I thought of you writing this one. I appreciate you took the time to read and review my poem.
besitos y abrazos
MariVal
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Thank you! 💖
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your summer haiku poem - Most excellent picture presentation - good enough to hang on the wall!!! I love the clarity and crispness. I would love to sit there in all that beauty and write... - Your poem has a good flow and paints a clear picture - leaving one to imagine the person who would wears the sun hat - Good job.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2022
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I like your summer haiku poem - Most excellent picture presentation - good enough to hang on the wall!!! I love the clarity and crispness. I would love to sit there in all that beauty and write... - Your poem has a good flow and paints a clear picture - leaving one to imagine the person who would wears the sun hat - Good job.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much. You are always so kind and honest, I really appreciate it. Your feedback is welcomed.
Gypsy
"The poet waits to paint the unsaid." ?Atticus
Comment from Regina Elliott
Quite a lovely haiku,
Gypsy Blue Rose. With the
end of summer fast approaching, I'm appreciating
summer poems even more.
Have a tranquil evening.
Many blessings to you. ~
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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2022
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Quite a lovely haiku,
Gypsy Blue Rose. With the
end of summer fast approaching, I'm appreciating
summer poems even more.
Have a tranquil evening.
Many blessings to you. ~
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Comment Written 25-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much. You are always so kind and honest, I really appreciate it. Your feedback is welcomed.
Gypsy
"The poet waits to paint the unsaid." ?Atticus
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Classic shot. Very relaxing and soothing. A perfect place to spend the summer but I'm afraid the chair would definitely "sag dangerously" under my weight.
Nicely worded.
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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2022
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Classic shot. Very relaxing and soothing. A perfect place to spend the summer but I'm afraid the chair would definitely "sag dangerously" under my weight.
Nicely worded.
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Comment Written 25-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2022
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LoL, me too.
Thank you very much, I appreciate your insightful and detailed review.
Gypsy