Where can I go?
A poem41 total reviews
Comment from aryr
What an interesting picture...an eyecatcher, indeed, Roy. I really enjoyed your words because they questioned God. He is everywhere, in the darkness and in the light. Blessings.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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What an interesting picture...an eyecatcher, indeed, Roy. I really enjoyed your words because they questioned God. He is everywhere, in the darkness and in the light. Blessings.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Thanks Alie, for these lovely comments and review, blessings Roy
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Most welcome, Roy. Blessings.
Comment from BethShelby
Nicely written. There is no place one can go to escape the presence of God. I too like the early morning just as dawn is breaking because it seems that our minds are in a better place to communicate with God although he is present in the darkest night as well.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Nicely written. There is no place one can go to escape the presence of God. I too like the early morning just as dawn is breaking because it seems that our minds are in a better place to communicate with God although he is present in the darkest night as well.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Thanks so much Beth, for these wonderful comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
I really like how you can take the seed of any thought or image and gradually work it into a message from or of God. No place to hide, absolutely!
Nicely written.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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I really like how you can take the seed of any thought or image and gradually work it into a message from or of God. No place to hide, absolutely!
Nicely written.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Thanks so much Gary, for these wonderful comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from June Sargent
These are thought-provoking words for those who think they can hide from God. He knows our innermost thoughts and desires. I find the early morning hours are the perfect time for reflection and self-examination. I enjoyed these sentiments.
I love the light of early morn,
where silence spreads the peace at dawn.
Where seeds of thought through birth can grow,
and faith can spark dawn's mercy glow.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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These are thought-provoking words for those who think they can hide from God. He knows our innermost thoughts and desires. I find the early morning hours are the perfect time for reflection and self-examination. I enjoyed these sentiments.
I love the light of early morn,
where silence spreads the peace at dawn.
Where seeds of thought through birth can grow,
and faith can spark dawn's mercy glow.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Thanks so much June, for these wonderful comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Who can or should argue with a righteous man. He seems to know the difference between right and wrong but as a saint I know we knew that before achieving birth but a third of heaven did not and were tossed out on their bumkins.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Who can or should argue with a righteous man. He seems to know the difference between right and wrong but as a saint I know we knew that before achieving birth but a third of heaven did not and were tossed out on their bumkins.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Thanks so much Tom, for these wonderful comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from scongrove
Beautiful post, my friend :) Worthy of a ten! I just love the photo. Great job with this. It brings light into my day.
My favorite part:
I love the light of early morn,
where silence spreads the peace at dawn.
Where seeds of thought through birth can grow,
and faith can spark dawn's mercy glow.
Thanks for sharing!
Always your fan,
Shana :)
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Beautiful post, my friend :) Worthy of a ten! I just love the photo. Great job with this. It brings light into my day.
My favorite part:
I love the light of early morn,
where silence spreads the peace at dawn.
Where seeds of thought through birth can grow,
and faith can spark dawn's mercy glow.
Thanks for sharing!
Always your fan,
Shana :)
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Thanks so much sweet girl
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Another thoughtful spiritual poem which ties in well with the chosen scripture verses.
It is comforting to know that God knows, sees and forgives all.
Thank you for sharing such insightful poetry.
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Another thoughtful spiritual poem which ties in well with the chosen scripture verses.
It is comforting to know that God knows, sees and forgives all.
Thank you for sharing such insightful poetry.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Thanks so much Shirley, for these wonderful comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Dubstahley
Your poem is very uplifting and spiritual in nature. Thank you for the related Bible verses in the author's note. They paired well with your writing. The only thing I would edit is the sentence is, "There's no place where his foes can hide." I would put, "There is no place his foes can hide." But that's just my two cents. As a beginning writer I have much to learn from the pros such as yourself. Continue leading the way! We are all reading and learning more one word at a time.
-dubstahley
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Your poem is very uplifting and spiritual in nature. Thank you for the related Bible verses in the author's note. They paired well with your writing. The only thing I would edit is the sentence is, "There's no place where his foes can hide." I would put, "There is no place his foes can hide." But that's just my two cents. As a beginning writer I have much to learn from the pros such as yourself. Continue leading the way! We are all reading and learning more one word at a time.
-dubstahley
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Thanks so much for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I think in these troubling times we can only appreciate the beauty around u such as the early morn, the birdsong and have faith that peace will eventually reign, and the seeking of power will abate. Another good write Roy that makes us look outside the nightly news.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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I think in these troubling times we can only appreciate the beauty around u such as the early morn, the birdsong and have faith that peace will eventually reign, and the seeking of power will abate. Another good write Roy that makes us look outside the nightly news.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Thanks so much Valda, for these wonderful comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from karenina
Moving verse, Roy. Those with faith are never in darkness when we have the light of Jesus aglow within us! Likewise, as you so aptly state in your awesome final stanza... God's foes will find no haven... No night will save them!
Karenina
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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Moving verse, Roy. Those with faith are never in darkness when we have the light of Jesus aglow within us! Likewise, as you so aptly state in your awesome final stanza... God's foes will find no haven... No night will save them!
Karenina
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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Thanks so much Karen, for these terrific comments and a super review, blessings Roy
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Welcome, Roy!
