Tanka Collection
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Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, This is amazingly beautiful. You are so very good at all kinds of haiku's and tanka poems. You use such great descriptive words and awesome imagery from the art work you chose. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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Gypsy, This is amazingly beautiful. You are so very good at all kinds of haiku's and tanka poems. You use such great descriptive words and awesome imagery from the art work you chose. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 10-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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Teri
Thank you very much for your time and kind review.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis
Comment from Nathan Macklin-Hill
I love this poem, it's short but gives so much energy. As a writer, I love a hidden message in writing and I deeply feel as if this is one of those poems. Seeing this really opened my eyes to more ideas as an Author and could potentially help me grow. Thank you for this.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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I love this poem, it's short but gives so much energy. As a writer, I love a hidden message in writing and I deeply feel as if this is one of those poems. Seeing this really opened my eyes to more ideas as an Author and could potentially help me grow. Thank you for this.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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Nathan, im curious, if you liked it so much why did you give me four stars. Is there anything i need to improve? Most people give 5 stars unless there's a problem.
If you are new let me know if I can help.
Thank you very much for your time and kind review.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis
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Hi, Yes I am new, I?m so sorry for the wrong rating! Is there a way I can change it? This was my favorite piece by far since being on Fanstory! I really hope to see more.
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Yes, you can change your review. Just go to the review, click on the rating and save. I know you're new. For future reference. Most reviews are 5 stars, unless there's something wrong. When you give a rating of 4 or less, give the poet or author a reason why so they can improve. (4 is more than 2 things wrong,); 3 is more than 3 wrong); )and one is really bad, it has to start all over from scratch.)
As I said before, let me know if I can help.
I have 2 free clubs for beginners and more to learn haiku and Japanese poetry. There are other clubs, it's a good way to learn. For clubs, go to the toolbar Click on SOCIAL, and click on any of the clubs you like.
Gypsy
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Ok thank you so much! I?m definitely looking into those clubs today!
Comment from dellsworthpoet
An ode to the world itself.
The flow is good. The form is followed. The presentation fits well and adds meaning to the words.
Thanks for a good read.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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An ode to the world itself.
The flow is good. The form is followed. The presentation fits well and adds meaning to the words.
Thanks for a good read.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis
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You are welcome.
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 10-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate the excellent review.
Gypsy
Comment from LovnPeace
The count is right on and depicts the picture line for line, in line with the colors in the scene. Hard to find more words. Simple and pleasant reading. Blessings, Barbara
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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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The count is right on and depicts the picture line for line, in line with the colors in the scene. Hard to find more words. Simple and pleasant reading. Blessings, Barbara
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Comment Written 10-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate the excellent review.
Gypsy
Comment from royowen
A beautifully written Tanka Gypsy, the presentation is really quite breathtaking, the narrative as always is framed in descriptive language, and the pivot line sets it up nicely, well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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A beautifully written Tanka Gypsy, the presentation is really quite breathtaking, the narrative as always is framed in descriptive language, and the pivot line sets it up nicely, well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 10-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate the excellent review.
Gypsy
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Most welcome