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Comment from Sankey
I always get iffy about these ages of fossils etc and the environuts claiming something is millions of years old! If we accept the biblical Creation account, the world is not much more than, at the most,12,000 years old. Thanks for an interesting read, anway. No spags.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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I always get iffy about these ages of fossils etc and the environuts claiming something is millions of years old! If we accept the biblical Creation account, the world is not much more than, at the most,12,000 years old. Thanks for an interesting read, anway. No spags.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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Who knows for sure how old the Earth is, or how long it will remain in existence? Perhaps some day in another place, that question will be answered. I believe all questions will one day be answered. Appreciate the review.
Comment from Shirley McLain
I don't follow country music anymore, but I used to. Back when Dolly Pardon was young and Bill Anderson. Thanks for sharing about the Saber Tooth Tiger find. I had not heard that before. You did a great job. Have a wonderful afternoon. Shirley
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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I don't follow country music anymore, but I used to. Back when Dolly Pardon was young and Bill Anderson. Thanks for sharing about the Saber Tooth Tiger find. I had not heard that before. You did a great job. Have a wonderful afternoon. Shirley
Comment Written 10-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Appreciate the review.
Comment from BermyBye50
Brett Matthew West,
Your Unwanted Dog chapter 7 is intriguing and brilliantly written. If you had told me the biography implied in the title was that of a dog, I would believe you. I hope the 6 previous chapters are still available to read here on FanStory. Chapter 8 already has wet my curiosity's appetite for what is to come.
All the best,
Eugene
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
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Brett Matthew West,
Your Unwanted Dog chapter 7 is intriguing and brilliantly written. If you had told me the biography implied in the title was that of a dog, I would believe you. I hope the 6 previous chapters are still available to read here on FanStory. Chapter 8 already has wet my curiosity's appetite for what is to come.
All the best,
Eugene
Comment Written 10-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
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They are available. Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Appreciate the review.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
You have a talent for painting a picture with words, Brett. I can't say I remember the Dolly Hit song you mention, but I do remember the song "Save a horse, Ride a cowboy." You left us with another cliff hanger! Good way to end a chapter> Well done. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
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You have a talent for painting a picture with words, Brett. I can't say I remember the Dolly Hit song you mention, but I do remember the song "Save a horse, Ride a cowboy." You left us with another cliff hanger! Good way to end a chapter> Well done. Nancy:)
Comment Written 10-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
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Thanks. Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Appreciate the review.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am enjoying reading this. Thank you for sharing this addition with us.
"Ticket City," I smiled, pleased by my actions. (period needed after "Ticket City." Smiled isn't a speech tag.)
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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
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I am enjoying reading this. Thank you for sharing this addition with us.
"Ticket City," I smiled, pleased by my actions. (period needed after "Ticket City." Smiled isn't a speech tag.)
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Comment Written 10-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
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Appreciate the review.
Comment from Douglas Goff
It is hard to jump in the middle of a book and read, but it did catch my interest. I like the way that you are able to paint a picture in the reader's head and I also enjoyed your eloquent use of words (not referencing butt hole, but coalescence and such). You have talent. Keep up the good work!
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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
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It is hard to jump in the middle of a book and read, but it did catch my interest. I like the way that you are able to paint a picture in the reader's head and I also enjoyed your eloquent use of words (not referencing butt hole, but coalescence and such). You have talent. Keep up the good work!
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Comment Written 10-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter of my autobiography. Appreciate the review.