One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Jasmine Girl
This is something a homeless person can be in the front row and enjoying it uninterrupted because it's free and priceless. You are making a good point here. But the solar energy is useful and priceless.
Well done.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2022
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This is something a homeless person can be in the front row and enjoying it uninterrupted because it's free and priceless. You are making a good point here. But the solar energy is useful and priceless.
Well done.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2022
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Lisa, Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Many hugs. (*÷*)
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". --Novalis
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your poem - excellent picture presentation - very pretty - nice senryu poem - good word count and poem flows well - I like the story about the homeless man spreading his mate for the night taking a front row seat for the grand performance - good job.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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I like your poem - excellent picture presentation - very pretty - nice senryu poem - good word count and poem flows well - I like the story about the homeless man spreading his mate for the night taking a front row seat for the grand performance - good job.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
"All you need is love." ? John Lennon and Paul McCartney
Comment from jessizero
I love your idea of the "priceless sunset" as a beautiful show to which the homeless man has the front row seat. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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I love your idea of the "priceless sunset" as a beautiful show to which the homeless man has the front row seat. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
"All you need is love." ? John Lennon and Paul McCartney
Comment from lyenochka
Love it! The beauties of nature like the sunset are indeed "priceless" and even the poorest can enjoy it. I like that the "homeless man" can afford the "front row seat!" Those not bogged down by possessions may have a clearer view of what's most precious.
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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Love it! The beauties of nature like the sunset are indeed "priceless" and even the poorest can enjoy it. I like that the "homeless man" can afford the "front row seat!" Those not bogged down by possessions may have a clearer view of what's most precious.
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Comment Written 05-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Yes, it's true. Possessions are replaceable but our loved ones and God's love is priceless.
Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Marival ❤️
"All you need is love." ? John Lennon and Paul McCartney
Comment from royowen
What a good senryu, I like the fact that the homeless man is getting a ringside view about the glory of creation, that's a wondrous thing, I've slept in the open, beautifully written, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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What a good senryu, I like the fact that the homeless man is getting a ringside view about the glory of creation, that's a wondrous thing, I've slept in the open, beautifully written, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 05-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
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Well done