One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from lyenochka
Love the feeling your poem gives me! That change from day to night really touches our spirts. I like that personification of the twilight chasing the last light of day. Pretty pictures, too, like the teasels at the end.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2022
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Love the feeling your poem gives me! That change from day to night really touches our spirts. I like that personification of the twilight chasing the last light of day. Pretty pictures, too, like the teasels at the end.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Marival xoxox
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis
Comment from royowen
What a great haiku, your consistency and knowledge are well spent on this site, you've have blown away the theories and rigidity attached to writing Japanese poetry, and put them in the court of the western writer. Well done Gypsy, , blessings Roy
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What a great haiku, your consistency and knowledge are well spent on this site, you've have blown away the theories and rigidity attached to writing Japanese poetry, and put them in the court of the western writer. Well done Gypsy, , blessings Roy
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Comment Written 20-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis
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Well done
Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
Good combo of words and illustrations for this post. Your coloring scheme complements your total presentation.
In the fading light, other reviewers will surely give you compliments before this day ends
Mark
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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2022
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Gypsy,
Good combo of words and illustrations for this post. Your coloring scheme complements your total presentation.
In the fading light, other reviewers will surely give you compliments before this day ends
Mark
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Comment Written 20-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis