Random Rhyme and Petty Prose
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Ten Days of Festivus "a collection of phenomenally mundane work.
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Comment from Sugarray77
Your poetry today is wacky... but, fun too. Great choices for the song. You must have pulled out an urban dictionary, or read a recent police report for inspiration. Fun read, Bill!!
Melissa
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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Your poetry today is wacky... but, fun too. Great choices for the song. You must have pulled out an urban dictionary, or read a recent police report for inspiration. Fun read, Bill!!
Melissa
Comment Written 16-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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Thanks, Melissa
Comment from BethShelby
This sound really painful. Is this supposed to be sung to the tune of the twelve days of Christmas. Perhaps you should have just tried to sleep through it.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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This sound really painful. Is this supposed to be sung to the tune of the twelve days of Christmas. Perhaps you should have just tried to sleep through it.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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It would indeed be sung to the last verse of Twelve Days of Christmas. I felt that was obvious so didn't mention it. This is a poem and not a recounting of my personal exploits. I can't remember any of those. : )
Comment from lyenochka
I remember Festivus from Seinfeld. This "Festivus for the rest of us" is really much worse than the celebration with the aluminum pole. But I'm sure the policeman will help him recover.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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I remember Festivus from Seinfeld. This "Festivus for the rest of us" is really much worse than the celebration with the aluminum pole. But I'm sure the policeman will help him recover.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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Certainly Seinfeld-inspired for the name. Animal House probably informs the rest.
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Oh, that makes sense. I think I've only seen snippets of Animal House.
Comment from Fleedleflump
Lol, sounds like a fairly normal stag do! I don't thinknI ever woke up in quite such a dodgy situation but there were certainly some painful mornings after :-)
Mike
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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Lol, sounds like a fairly normal stag do! I don't thinknI ever woke up in quite such a dodgy situation but there were certainly some painful mornings after :-)
Mike
Comment Written 16-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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This is a situation where waking up is probably the second-best scenario.
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Lol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
LOL!!!!! That's so funny, especially something up your nose and a policeman standing in front of you! You are hilarious, Bill, I love your writing. I'm still in and out, but like to catch up when I can, and usually look to see if I've missed an episode of the presidential election. This is brilliant, Bill, and I'm sure it would have done well in a Christmas contest. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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LOL!!!!! That's so funny, especially something up your nose and a policeman standing in front of you! You are hilarious, Bill, I love your writing. I'm still in and out, but like to catch up when I can, and usually look to see if I've missed an episode of the presidential election. This is brilliant, Bill, and I'm sure it would have done well in a Christmas contest. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
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Comment Written 16-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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Thank you, Sandra, for the kind and encouraging review.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I start to like this Random Rhyme and Petty Prose. This is a funny take on the Ten Days of Christmas. I especially like the following line:
bow ties on my big toes
I'm looking forward to reading more.
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I start to like this Random Rhyme and Petty Prose. This is a funny take on the Ten Days of Christmas. I especially like the following line:
bow ties on my big toes
I'm looking forward to reading more.
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Comment Written 16-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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Thanks, Lisa
