The Monkey Show
My first time to see a monkey.26 total reviews
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Sure this is a memory you will never forget.
A monkey on a bike would be a sight to behold.
That monkey looked like he had more than one talent.
Interesting read.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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Sure this is a memory you will never forget.
A monkey on a bike would be a sight to behold.
That monkey looked like he had more than one talent.
Interesting read.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your review and nice comments.
Beth
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Indeed, you have narrated a true story, this tells about a monkey, and how a monkey did all such activities you still remember even after 60 or more years, the monkey's behaviour for his master is still rememberable; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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Indeed, you have narrated a true story, this tells about a monkey, and how a monkey did all such activities you still remember even after 60 or more years, the monkey's behaviour for his master is still rememberable; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
Comment Written 15-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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Thank you for another excellent review and nice comments.
Beth
Comment from Fleedleflump
You do a great job of recalling the joy of new things, and of course when we're little, we encounter new things more often. I love how you convey the excitement. This was a pleasure to read.
Mike
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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You do a great job of recalling the joy of new things, and of course when we're little, we encounter new things more often. I love how you convey the excitement. This was a pleasure to read.
Mike
Comment Written 15-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the review and comments, Mike. I'm glad I was able to show how excited that was for me as a child. Back then many things were new and exciting.
Beth
Comment from zanya
This story is an absolute delight. A young child being taken on a special adventure and the story conveys effectively the child's sense of wonder and 'it was a beautiful Summer night'- no further embellishment needed.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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This story is an absolute delight. A young child being taken on a special adventure and the story conveys effectively the child's sense of wonder and 'it was a beautiful Summer night'- no further embellishment needed.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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Thank you so much Zanya. It was another time, and it didn't take a lot to get children excited about something simple. I truly appreciate the six stars.
Comment from damommy
What a treat for you!!!! A memory you will cherish always. I don't think children today get as excited about things as we did in our day. So sad.
We used to have parades when the county fair opened. One year, the Cisco Kid and Poncho were in it. They rode over and shook my hand. I can still remember how I felt then.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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What a treat for you!!!! A memory you will cherish always. I don't think children today get as excited about things as we did in our day. So sad.
We used to have parades when the county fair opened. One year, the Cisco Kid and Poncho were in it. They rode over and shook my hand. I can still remember how I felt then.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the review and nice comments. You are right. Children today would need much more than a street show to get them excited. I'm glad we grew in those days. We were the lucky ones.
Beth
Comment from Wendy G
What a beautiful story about a very special outing, which is a cherished memory for you. You wrote it very well - interesting and engaging throughout, and easy to visualise your excitement and pleasure. best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2022
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What a beautiful story about a very special outing, which is a cherished memory for you. You wrote it very well - interesting and engaging throughout, and easy to visualise your excitement and pleasure. best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 15-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2022
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Thank you Wendy. I'm so glad you enjoyed my little story. In those days it was easier to excite children with simple treats. This was very special to me.
Beth
Comment from Mary Vigasin
This was a delightful story. I truly enjoyed reading as I could feel your excitement in your words about going with your grandparents and in watching the monkey show.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2022
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This was a delightful story. I truly enjoyed reading as I could feel your excitement in your words about going with your grandparents and in watching the monkey show.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2022
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I really appreciate the great review and you affirmative comments.
Beth
Comment from jessizero
This post was adorable. The excitement and joy were evident in your words of this story. I was almost giddy for you. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2022
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This post was adorable. The excitement and joy were evident in your words of this story. I was almost giddy for you. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2022
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Thank you for an excellent review and comments.
Beth
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
I enjoyed this true story very much. The antics of the money were so funny. I would have liked to see it with you, but the story was the next best thing. We watched some monkeys in the zoo once where some construction was going in where they were. They took turns jumping down in the hole where a pump of some kind was being placed, then walking around and scratching their heads like they were trying to figure out what was going on. Hilarious to watch!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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I enjoyed this true story very much. The antics of the money were so funny. I would have liked to see it with you, but the story was the next best thing. We watched some monkeys in the zoo once where some construction was going in where they were. They took turns jumping down in the hole where a pump of some kind was being placed, then walking around and scratching their heads like they were trying to figure out what was going on. Hilarious to watch!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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Thank you very for a great review. Monkeys are funny to watch when they aren't preforming and are just being themselves. I could watch them for hours. Some of the larger apes act so much like people. I love to watch the adults with their young.
Beth
Comment from humpwhistle
What a wonderful, exotic adventure for a little girl to share with her grandparents. Those traveling shows were big excitement for little towns off the beaten path.
I got a real sense of your 'little girl excitement'. Nicely told.
Best of luck at the polls!
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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What a wonderful, exotic adventure for a little girl to share with her grandparents. Those traveling shows were big excitement for little towns off the beaten path.
I got a real sense of your 'little girl excitement'. Nicely told.
Best of luck at the polls!
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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Thank you Lee. I'm surprised and pleased that you give this simple little story such a glowing review. It was very exciting back then. Today is another time, and I doubt if it would have much appeal to a child now. That so much for the six stars.