Comment from royowen

Excellent

I love the skilled ambiguity and abstraction you've worked into this fabulous work gear Gypsy. The thought that a spider who is used to a webbed consequential life, is in danger is precious, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022

Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis

reply by royowen on 13-Jul-2022

Welcome

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I love the double meaning of hanging by a thread! I don't know if I feel sorry for the spider or not. :)
Thank you for sharing your poem here, and best wishes to you.

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 Comment Written 12-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022

Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol! Look out, Mr. Spider! I like your word play about the tenuous situation the spider is in because the kid scientist will like to bother him while he studies the creature.

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 Comment Written 12-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022

Atticus was into bug science for a few weeks. It was hard to find them. He got tired of it.

Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis

reply by lyenochka on 13-Jul-2022

I'm sure you'll inspire him to appreciate all the living things!