Comment from
K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed the spirit of this poem.
You did a terrific job with the prompt very creative and clever.
The metred phrases create a playful cadence that skips along like a pebble on a pond.
The presentation mirrors your writings sentiment.
Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
Thanks for this lovely review!