Tanka Collection
Viewing comments for Chapter 37 "Let's Pretend"Romantic Tanka Poems
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Comment from aryr
Definitely an interesting picture, Gypsy. I really appreciated your words because even with a sense of sadness they were profound and deeply touching. Blessed be n hugs!
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
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Definitely an interesting picture, Gypsy. I really appreciated your words because even with a sense of sadness they were profound and deeply touching. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment Written 01-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback. Blessed be & hugs.
Gypsy ♡
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid."--Atticus
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You are so very welcome, Gypsy. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Not sure if you have spelt Promise like this on purpose, but I thought I'd mention it. When we love like this we are enjoying the closeness that we become very forgiving and sometimes lose our self respect when someone cheats on us, a moving write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
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Not sure if you have spelt Promise like this on purpose, but I thought I'd mention it. When we love like this we are enjoying the closeness that we become very forgiving and sometimes lose our self respect when someone cheats on us, a moving write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
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Thank you for catching that misspelled word.
Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy ♡
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid."--Atticus
Comment from kahpot
Starting a new romance and dealing with other relationships can be hard to overcome sometimes, this is an excellent read as I can also imagine that someone or both have had affairs, (diming-dimming) very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
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Starting a new romance and dealing with other relationships can be hard to overcome sometimes, this is an excellent read as I can also imagine that someone or both have had affairs, (diming-dimming) very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 30-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
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Kym,
Thank you very much for your time and kind words. And Thank you for letting me know about the error.
Gypsy ♡
The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid.--Atticus
Comment from lyenochka
You captured the yearning for that romantic tenderness so well. The narrator remembers the romances she treasured and wishes to re-kindle that feeling even if the other has to pretend.
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amidst straits in diming light (dimming)
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
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You captured the yearning for that romantic tenderness so well. The narrator remembers the romances she treasured and wishes to re-kindle that feeling even if the other has to pretend.
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amidst straits in diming light (dimming)
Comment Written 30-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much, Helen. Other reviewers let me know too. It's corrected now ♡ besitos y abrazos.
Gypsy ♡
The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid.--Atticus
Comment from LisaMay
The request for comfort and the sharing of a romantic moment is conveyed poetically in your words. Pretence covers the hurt of loss when dreams dwindle and die.
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amidst straits in diming light (dimming)
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
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The request for comfort and the sharing of a romantic moment is conveyed poetically in your words. Pretence covers the hurt of loss when dreams dwindle and die.
Correction:
amidst straits in diming light (dimming)
Comment Written 30-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind words.
Corrected, thank you!
Gypsy ♡
The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid.--Atticus
Comment from jake cosmos aller
I loved this erotically charged tanka series about love, lust, memories, desires, dreams, all wrapped together in a fine erotically charged set of interlocking Tanka verses.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
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I loved this erotically charged tanka series about love, lust, memories, desires, dreams, all wrapped together in a fine erotically charged set of interlocking Tanka verses.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind words.
Gypsy
The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid.--Atticus
Comment from Iza Deleanu
The ending is like the last breath of a haltering rose-
dreams dwindle and die,
sometimes...for some of us --
all we have left
is remembrance of romance
amidst straits in diming light
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
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The ending is like the last breath of a haltering rose-
dreams dwindle and die,
sometimes...for some of us --
all we have left
is remembrance of romance
amidst straits in diming light
Comment Written 30-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
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Iza,
Thank you very much for your time and kind words.
Gypsy ♡
The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid.--Atticus
Comment from royowen
I guess a shadow that reminds of what could be is better than nothing ar all, a cuddle is love's expression, it gives that contact we always crave. Whatever age we are. Beautifully written my friend, well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
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I guess a shadow that reminds of what could be is better than nothing ar all, a cuddle is love's expression, it gives that contact we always crave. Whatever age we are. Beautifully written my friend, well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 30-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
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Yes, everyone can use a hug and tenderness.
Thank you very much for your time and kind words.
Gypsy ♡
The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid.--Atticus
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Welcome
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy----although in reality I could never do what the author did; loyalty is everything to e when it comes to matters of the heart, and once she crosses the line on fidelity, that's it for me
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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----although in reality I could never do what the author did; loyalty is everything to e when it comes to matters of the heart, and once she crosses the line on fidelity, that's it for me
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Comment Written 30-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind words.
Gypsy ♡
The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid.--Atticus